I LOVE YOU! Ok usually I finish the story before I review, BUT YOU DESERVE A REVIEW FOR THIS CHAPTER SEEING AS YOU PUT AVENUE Q IN IT!

OMG I love it! Gen/you is so funny! cant wait to read the next one!

that story was really good, it was funny, adventurous, and really well written. i loved the detail! keep up the good work! i hope to read your sequel soon!

Calabria

Ah...that was bloody brillant and really cute, the girls were a trip. Thank you also for not making Elizabeth entirely spoiled, obnoxious, or anything else that would have ruined the story. I hate it when it gets completely off character plot line if someone tries to hook Will up with someone, but you didn't. And thank you. Again, this story was great. I have you thought of doing the rest of the triliogy? That would be interesting with a Roz and Gen twist to it.

*grins happily*

Wonderful... simply wonderful!

Adding in the deleted scenes was a very nice touch as well...

Only problem now is that it's done with... perhaps we might be getting more of the next story before long?

*puppy dog eyes*

That was perfect.

“You’re making me all veclempt.”

Wow... I seriously thought my mom was the only person to say "veclempt"...

So, I'm pretty much hoping for a Roz/Norrington hook up... although if you keep doing this through the movies, that will be both incredibly sweet and depressing.

Drama with Gen and Anamaria? nice. :-P

*sniggers* I love the innuendo. This is brilliant... I can't wait to see how you work the girls into the rest of the story.

Brilliant. I love how you did the fight with Jack and Will.

“That your bayonet, or are you happy to see me, love?” The officer shoved her along again, but she couldn’t help but notice his eyes crinkle slightly at the remark.

omg. that's brilliant.

*grins*

Gen, my dearling, you are beyond awesome. Any hope of getting another seven chapters tomorrow?

Lol, this is really good! Keep updating, I want to find out what happens next...

One question: these two (Roz and Gen) have seen CotBP before, haven't they? Because sometimes it seems that they have, and others they haven't...

and what about the monotony of all those self insert fics floating around...