Heartbreaking and ultimately fitting for the game. You captured a great character and the world got a little darker when Crono went with Marle instead of Lucca.

Well that's what we have fanfiction for I suppose. But thank you for posting this!

Aw, cute. I've always liked Nadia, but I'd have to agree with you that Lucca/Crono would probably be a better pairing. Lucca has the better theme, so why shouldn't she get the guy?

I agree with you...I've always believed that Lucca made a better match for Crono than Marle did...Although lately I've become somewhat of a Lucca/Magus shipper... _;;

This poem is very good. You can tell that Lucca's sad, a bit jealous, and perhaps a bit despairing...It also sounds as if it's Lucca talking/speaking. At least, it does to me. Nice job. _

that was good a peom , hope u write more

that was good a peom , hope u write more

ROCK ON! Lucca was a much better match. After all, it's the smart people who have all the (real) power...

Wow.. beautiful! _ I love it... the perfection!

That is a lovely poem. Don't listen to those that only see things from one perspective and won't look at other possibilities. Your poem is wonderful whether the reader likes the pairing or not.

I absolutely love this. I am a Glenn/Lucca supporter and I'm just a sucker for these type of fanfiction. Beautiful poetry _ I love it!

Oh my god. . . When I log in, this is going on my favorite storys list! That was absolutly beautiful! How lond did it take to write this?

Oh hell, I hate Lucca, so I love that Nadia got her guy. Nadia/Crono forever!

I must say, this is a truely heart-rending poem. Greatly communicates sadness on Lucca's part, as well as complete lack of knowledge from Crono, too. This is most definitely going on my favorite stories list!

Keep up the great (even if it is depressing) work!

I hated Marle. Lucca looked like the perfect match...I agree.

Good grief. As if.