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Pyromanic Kittie
2008-04-08
ch 14,
abuseI loved it! ^_^ great job!
Lights aura858
2008-03-17
ch 14,
abuseYeah! I'm reviewing your story! I really like it. It was cool to see Hiei before he joins the Yu Yu Hakusho gang! Once again, great story!
YusukiShredder
2008-03-13
ch 14,
abuseCan't wait for the A New Beginning... and that's why I'm glad its up! WOOT! *hops around in wolf form hyperactively* TO THE SEQUEL!
YusukiShredder
2008-03-13
ch 13,
abuseDUDET! AWESOME CHAPIEE! Really, realkly, good! I love how you ended it! ^.^
Shadowess 88
2008-03-11
ch 14,
abuseOh wow! You're overall story is amazing! Man... Hiei's old.. Makes me think about my story and the pairings. Yikes. I should tie in Hiei's approximate age in somehow... Okay, enough of my rambling. I give you 12.75/10!! *gives you cookies* I can't wait for the second story! ^_^
The Grim Reaper 2.0
2008-03-11
ch 14,
abuseaw thats so cute ^_^
The Grim Reaper 2.0
2008-03-11
ch 13,
abuseWow... umm yeah thats well ... I didn't see it coming >_
The Grim Reaper 2.0
2008-03-10
ch 12,
abuseHey umm yeah LONGEST FAN FIC CHAPTER I HAVE EVER READ! But very very good now i am mad because i don't know whats going to happen dam you and your mastery over suspense!
Shadowess 88
2008-03-06
ch 12,
abuseHoly cow that was a long chapter! *mo... pushes cow away* I loved it! Especially the flirting and the Evanescense song! Very fitting. But nu! I need to know what happens! So yes: Updates are love, but not forced. (please update though, and I'll read your new story too! and review for that one!)
YusukiShredder
2008-03-06
ch 12,
abuseHAHA! I will REVIEW, and give you...COOKIES! Good job fox! heh, heh, can't believe that whole grion thing happened! So pervy!... okay so it was just plain lol worthy! -lols- ANYWAY! I liked it... its so wierd that without even trying and not even reading this story before making up my story, THEY'RE A LOT ALIKE! Its cool... UPDATE SOON WOMEN! -shakes-
YusukiShredder
2008-02-22
ch 11,
abuse-aplauds- brilliant darling, brilliant! Absolutly marvelous, keep chuggin at it! *said in weird, cheezy accent*
YusukiShredder
2008-02-22
ch 1,
abuseWow... that is awesome! Really well frazed ans tuffs along that line!
The Grim Reaper 2.0
2008-02-21
ch 11,
abuseYou think to much your story... which makes it hard for you to write it you need to calm down a bit but on another note why should i be nice i am a critic lol jk and yeah okay i will look out for the new fan fic
Ani-Mimi
2008-02-19
ch 10,
abuseYour story is certainly interesting. Good luck with it.
Unolai
2008-02-13
ch 10,
abuseI like your story. It's like I get sucked right into it! (Which is a good thing!) I just started writing my own YYH-story. Will you read it and tell me what you think? I would really appreciate it. :)
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