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Quiet-man-writing 2008-09-27 ch 20,	abuseThat was just perfect. Evangeline's revenge was swiping his tapioca in contrast to Negi's own guilt. And yet he still hasn't learned. You've captured Negi's child essence so perfectly. But I'm begging you; you have got to do something with Konoka's Mr. Palmer and Professor Backhand! That is just too good to let go. I've always wanted to see Konoka apply some discipline. She's always so nice and sweet it would be just epic to see her being mean. I'm on my hands and knees here!
Tsutomu Teruko 2008-09-26 ch 20,	abuseAnd so Negi learned a valuable lesson in being gentle with girls. Good boy! I have to say that I liked the way you handled Negi here; in LIAB you often wrote him seeming much older than he is, but here he really seemed like a little boy and I liked that a lot. (And the you wrote Evangeline was cute, too!) Also: Negi eats tapioca pudding? Go figure!
Eternal-Longing 2008-09-26 ch 20,	abuseGah, Mr. Palmer and Professor Backhand, are you trying to kill me laughing? Oh, you do realize that Negi had an encounter with a Succubus in Markham Chronicles, right? This whole shadow thing with the guilt and the shame and apologizing and the things chasing Negi and the dead people... really similar to real life, except dramatized. I love it. And tapioca pudding! How little kids like sweets and tapioca pudding! Negi's just a little kid. Little kid's need to learn how to apologize! I had fun with this one. And you say you don't like Eva when you do such a good one... Brother, you just have to let it go. -Eternal Longing
Eternal-Longing 2008-07-19 ch 19,	abuseWow, it's that really old thing that you wrote for Masa. I think I reviewed the old one so I have nothing to say here, except wow, and that I can appreciate more the second time around. Video games, ha. So, are you and Masa rich now? Alms for the poor man, alms for the poor... -Eternal Longing
Tsutomu Teruko 2008-07-18 ch 19,	abuseOh, lord. (FACEPALM)
Bassclone13 2008-05-21 ch 18,	abuseC-chapter 12 man. Oh my f!@#ing god. I couldn't stop laughing between the Yu-Gi-Oh jokes, the stereotypes, and the plot itself. It was pure Epic WIN. And poor Sayo. XD
MasterSprtn117 2008-05-20 ch 18,	abuseWow...I'm really depressed from reading mission 16.. It's just so sad.. I hope you keep updating with more stories.
Benjamin Bradt 2008-05-04 ch 12,	abuse“I wonder where all of the girls went off to, today?” Negi wondered aloud. Kotaro shrugged, “I don’t know, but damn, Negi, why are you always thinking about them, anyway?” “Why aren’t YOU always thinking about them?” “What?” “Yeah, you think about that one.” - I laughed so hard I gave myself a migraine.
Benjamin Bradt 2008-05-04 ch 9,	abusecan't stop laughing Freaking (haha) Hilarious.
Benjamin Bradt 2008-05-04 ch 5,	abuseOuch! So cruel.
Benjamin Bradt 2008-05-04 ch 2,	abuse. . . Holy ** . . .
Midnight Sleeper 2008-03-11 ch 18,	abuseHooray for being better late than never! Finally getting around to that reviewing thing that I oh-so-suck at! Anyways, onto the story. One word comes to mind: depressing. Depressing, but good. The story being masked by the various scenes Negi goes through leaves it up in the air until the very end as to if he is just hallucinating or dying, and that adds to the story that much more. Sad story to be sure, but a good read nonetheless. Can't wait to see what else you have up your sleeve. Until next time, ~Midnight
Andoru-Kun 2008-02-28 ch 1,	abuseLol, I've been around both this place and narutofan with tazmo,along with plenty of other places for year's now. But I never really bothered to make in account. I do leave reviews though as guest. Anywho, not only did your profile amuse me, (yet to read stories) you share both my first name and much of my interest's. Im eighteen and am glad to have found another good writer.
Ambrant Arandel 2008-02-19 ch 18,	abuseI nearly cried reading that story. It reminds me of the movie 'What Dreams May Come'. I think the way you blended reality and dreams in the way the students were acting was quite effective. It's almost as if Negi's mind was taking dialogue from the girls as they were visiting him and put it into the context of the dreams he was having. Quite impressive. Actually, I have to amend my earlier statement. After reading the ending, I just went back to reread the statements of the girls in the context of things that were being said over Negi's comatose body. THAT was when I cried. I think it was the image of Setsuna dragging Ku Fei from the hospital room. While she was screaming that did it. Congratulations, you've avenged your tears which I evoked in 'Child of Mine'. bows A.A.
Kafka'sdragon 2008-02-18 ch 18,	abuseFirst Dark Nodoka, now this. You are one evil dude. I love it.

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