Aw, how sad!

You do know that Oliver doesn't die then, right?

Great story, I pity poor Oliver now. The main strength of your story is how you gave him a backstory. It's very interesting to know why a character thinks or does what he thinks or does and your theory is convincing.
In short, you made him alive, less grotesque than he's shown in the game.

Hm, very interesting. Still detest Oliver as much as I did before, but it would take so much skill to make readers pity Oliver for whatever reason. And that wasn't even your goal, so excuse my musing. I liked this fic. Nice background with Kate.

Quite the beauty this fanfic!
Honest, I love it. It's just... perfect. It's strong and, in a wreid way, sort of pure... I guess. ^^"

Very good. It's a shame there are only three Oliver fics on the whole site...

Very elegant and yes it made me like Oliver more. I really like him now. AMAZING. I Love you. Oh and fix the problems I told you about.

This fic was greatly in character, but it succeeds in something far greater than that, it helps humanize Oliver. He's not a tub of lard now, rather, he's a strange, obsessive man who loves beauty. You have done an extremely good job, and I have to commend you!

That was... beautiful, ironically enough. :B

Anyway, very nicely done. You were very insightful in your portrayal of his growing obsession for beauty. It was very believable! Excellent care to detail, and I love how solidly it was concluded, and how it remained Oliver-centric to the end. (How like him.)

Wonderful job! :D

That was... amazing.

The descriptions were gorgeous. And you really expanded on the Oliver's character very well.

That was beautiful. I've never seen an Oliver fic before but you portrayed him and his thoughts wonderfully. Thumbs up for an awesome fic :)

wow, that was quite interesing! YOu took his madness to a whole new level. First it's just a hobby, then an obession, then it takes over his mind entirely. Well done

Oliver...OliverOliverOliver.

Yay Oliver!

Your description of things blows my mind away sometimes.So much rich, needed detail, but not overmuch and fit so nicely into the story that it Rocks!
Like, 'Her name was Kate.'

Just so simply, and powerful (in a naming a character sorta way.)

Rock on!

I was prepared to give you a standing ovation for writing Oliver fic in the first place, so now I guess I have to give you two. I don't particularly like him, but he's an intriguing character and you've done really well at making him understandable - while not making excuses; "sub-human furred boots," for one thing, I found both disgusting and IC.
Bravo.

Oh I like this...
Very nice characterisation of Oliver. You actually make me like him XD

That was just...Wow. Wow. Beautifully written, perfect! Descriptive, interesting, just perfect! I loved it!