I liked Snape's monologue at the end, it was quite nice.

wow, it really tells you what he's thinking. You're a very good writer.

HI! I just wanted to let you know about a new fan-fic site, set up and run by yours truly (ha). Anyway, nothing against but I have had some issues getting stories to upload correctly, won't go into much more than that. Well, all of this said, I started my site (again) and this time I was able to load efiction so it runs like a fanfic site. Just go to the URL below this message if you want to read, and I'd love to have some more authors if you want somewhere else to post.

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Not sure why I found this under Oliver Wood's name, but I like it. It's well-written; good job.

Don't you just feel sorry for Snape. He gave up so much more, than anyone gave him credit for.

i love how you wrote about snape!

i've always though snape was innocent really, and you've really written what must have happened brilliantly!! thanks

Wow, this was really good. I loved Luna! You portrayed all of their characteristics perfectly, and although Neville wasn't his usual frightened, clumsy self, it still fit well with the book because he did grow bolder. Yay Neville! :-D