Omg it was beautiful, for this fic to be ur first one it was really incredeble, my first one suck lol (please forgive my bad english)

Ur story is going to my favorite list _

See ya

OMG! i thought that song u put in was so perfect for this couple! i really liked your story it made me cry! anyway i hope u rite more stories like this one . it really moved me. until then...BYE!

Hi my written english isn't so good so pleas dont look at it.

Il like your ff very much. Il love the way you put out the feelings of Clef and Umi, who are my favorite paarings. So pleas make a nother story who is longer than that.

Thank you and sorry for my bad english.

:-) Peniela

I'm glad I didn't have to wait a long time for them to confess their love. The story is really good, you should be proud. Umi and Clef all the way! They are my favorite couple ever.

Oh my gosh! That was marvelous! Beautiful! Love it so much! .

ok and aw cute.

Beautiful!

I liked the way you portrayed Umi's courage. She's playful and outgoing, but also the most girlish and child-like from the three knights.

Omigosh! waah! *starts bawling* U mean THIS is ur first fanfic ever? no way! Believe me, i was holing my breath the whole time during their scene together. *watering eyes* It really touched me! It's like there's something w/in d story itself that attracted me into it; emotions seemed to be attached within the words. You're a really good writer! Nice romance mixed with a little angst! Continue writing more! You're one of the writers that makes reading fanfiction worthwhile! (hehe, if you have some spare time, i'd really appreciate it if we could email each other! hehe, to discuss writing fanfics i guess! _

Please write more! Wtite about anything, I don't care-You are a superb writer.

The story wasn't all out of whack despite the guitar playing Umi, but everyone sounded so mature and more like heroes who had saved a world rather than dumb children.

I can't wait for your shrine!

Hey! I liked it too! It just took me a while to look at some of the other stuff you've done. Just curious, but when's the next update of Devotions coming out? If you're busy I understand. Look to hear a lot from me though on that one. I don't think I've reviewed much for it yet. But I will! I promise! CYA!

Holy bejesus that was beautiful. XD I love that song, by the way. I need to sing it some time-it's that stupid low note at the end that I have trouble with. .0 Anyway, I LOVED the story, it made me happy and tingly. _

- Trixie-chan

me like!

nice!that was pretty good! me like it!

this story is awsome or i mean song fic! its awesome!

That was lovely,and I like how you did Clef's personality. Write a sequel, email me, and I'll send you fanart .