DUDE! This is awesome. Please write more! :D

that was kinda confusing...is river working her inner bitch?

omg! rotf! luvin ur fic! u hav to update soon, okay? i wanna see wot happens to river!

Awsome story!

I apologise for any stupid reviews here.

*SUCH AS THE ONE BELOW*

My friend likes to mess around.

i love ur fanfic...happy now? she's/ he's forced me to write dis peepe brain s(he) a meany dnt eat/ read her ff for the love of all that is good and propa danke

Well that's rumours for ya. All you can do is ignor them, good one on River for making the right choice. And I can all to easily see Sev getting into a wrestling match with his scarf and losing. Tee Hee. Update soon _

Great story! Are you ever going to update again? I hope you continue this story!

NO! u can't stop i there! thats not fair! i wanna read more :'-(

Hi... um, what are you going to interview me on? My lust for BUTTSECKS *drools*? Or my absolute complete and utter hte for Mary-sues? I mean, you can't exactly ask about my story cuz I haven't got one.

Incidentally, interesting plotline, if only because I'm in the latest chapter *squees* Mad fourth years unite!1!1oneoneoneeleventy!"1121!

Oh the drama. Um one thing I forgot to mention for the last chapter, i think it was, you said "river stared up at the stars through her window", but the Slytherin house doesn't have windows, which is something you mentioned earlier. Which brings me to this because their common room is below the lake there are no windows, but they do have port holes, at least that's the impression I've been given. But not to fret, tis only but a slight mistake. The rest of your story is great.

The conversations girls have. *shakes head* I don't know why, but I can just picture that actually happening, like a movie in my head.

Ouch, well then, that sucks. Pretty accurate though I have a hard time believing that everyone, including the professor would laugh. But it still works makes you feel really bad for River.

He, he cute little Severus. Looking forward to see how this turns out.

oh such a devious plan. But I can see something going wrong. I don't no what you were on about, when you said this was a bad story. Except for a bit more description, I think it's fine.