hi,its so hard for me to choice i love naruto and sasuke together but on the other hand i love gaara with naruto too. this i like the end of the world gor me choicing. i love the beginning and the end. i kinda skipped a head.. love it you should write more stories like this..
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Very lovely~ ^__^ But I just wanted to inform you of a typo near the end of this chapter "He carefully laid on top of Draco, panting heavily" ... Draco? Hahahaha~ I dear hope not, xovers aren't really my thing, lol~ ^__< Good job though, I really enjoyed it.

Hallo x3 I'm just starting to read this and its so cute but I'm totally confused on what timeline you used. I figured out they're 15 cause Gaara is Kazekage but what about Sasuke's Chidori and Naru's Rasengan. Arent they able to use it?? o-o

I loved this story so much! You always found great ways to keep it interesting, can't wait to see the sequel! XD

Naruto is supposed to be strong! There is such a thing as a strong Uke you know! But this Naruto...he couldn't even protect himself in a one-on-one fight?! SKINNY ARMS! SASUKE IS SO FAST?!! Personality recamp or what?
You might as well just re-nname Naruto 'Hinata' in this fanfic! It is great writing though. The story and grammar are very well written; I just am one of those people who have a sense of pride when it comes to their fav. main characters!
(I like a Seme Naruto, with at least above average skills, and slight over-protectiveness)

Wow, a lemon and a sequel! you just made my night! I can't wait! Thanks for the chapter!

me: i smell the heated battle 4 naruto's heart
tohru: or that could just be your farting
me: (blush) IS NOT!
X: *natie's cute when she's embarassed*

~great story!

me: omg cute gaanaru moment =>_<= (blush)
tohru: why won't you make any cute moments with me and tsubaki?
me: tsubaki's a pervert, what do you want me to do.
X: really.
tohru: you guys suck!

~great chapter!

me: sasuke's got some catching up to do
tohru: (giggle)
X: *mad*

Thanks for the update about what's going on! I think I've said this already but I really like Gaara x Naruto but in the end I still prefer SasuNaru :D Either way you decide I believe it's gonna be good story ^__^

AH...NO... That's not fair i speant 3 days rereading this story just have to wait again...AH NO... btw Love it... and the needle and orochimaru thing genis... keep going with this one it's good... you just have you remember to check you spelling and what words you actually use...there were a lot of time i had to go back and reread cuz i couldn't understand a sentence...

me & tohru: *singing* gaara's going to win, gaara's going to win
X: just wait and ** see

GREAT STORY!

X: ...sasuke's going to win
tohru: no gaara's going to win!
me: nO BotH of TheM aRe Going to WiN!
X & Tohru:...slow.

GREAT STORY!

lovely story and i vote for Naru/Gaara. They're just so perfect the way you've written them.

yay u updated been w8ing for like a year now..
anyways ty good chapter
and i can't say i like m-preg.. so plz don't do it =]
and aww poor sasuke lol