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| Murasaki Shikibu 2008-03-19 ch 7,  | abuseWow..that was good! |
| Alexian-Goddess 2007-11-24 ch 7, | abuseI love your fic! My God is it EVER fantastic! Please update soon! |
| Isolated Mind 2007-11-21 ch 7, | abuseWOW. I have been looking for some good Konan x Pein fanfiction and I am so happy that I read this. You write so well,I'm jealous! |
| IrisEclipsed 2007-11-07 ch 7, | abuseI do love innuendo, and you give it to me just the way I like it. Have I told you lately, how much I love you for writing PeinKonan? Ok, this is my 3rd favorite chapter, just because of the suggestiveness. *waggles eyebrows* XD |
| IrisEclipsed 2007-10-09 ch 6, | abuseOh my god, it seems like he was going to rape her at the beginning. BEND OVER, BIZNATCH! Sorry, lol, I'm just really hyper right now. I think this might be my favorite chapter behind the first. ^.^ Awesome chapter, please update soon! |
| AGENT KELL 2007-10-08 ch 6, | abuseoh`kay, i am confused. o_o please forgive me. i am tired from maths exam, and my mind is not functioning properly. ah update Ja! `IC-chan |
| Nadeshiko-Nara 2007-10-06 ch 4, | abuseSpoilers Follow: Yes, Pein is from Rain. We learned that his parents were killed in the war and that he was left orphaned. |
| IrisEclipsed 2007-10-05 ch 5, | abuseOk, you know how you dislike ShikaTem? Well, that's how I feel about OCs. Oh, I wonder what other secrets Konan had kept from Pein. Maybe she has a secret lover . . . or is really a man in disguise. XD That'd be so weird if that happened because then she wouldn't be the bad ass chick in Akatsuki she'd just be . . . that one person who can turn into paper from Akatsuki. This is to make up for the lame ass review I wrote for chapter 4. |
| IrisEclipsed 2007-10-05 ch 4, | abusePein's touchy-feely . . . NICE. |
| AGENT KELL 2007-10-05 ch 5, | abuseoh. so your AU thing is that, Konan doesn't have a sister, but you added the sister in |
| EbIL cHEEsE-SaMA 2007-10-03 ch 4, | abuseI heard that Pein is from Rain. I'm not really sure, though. Another great chapter. Sometimes, I wonder why am I so attracted to this story... .__." I only read long stories. Guess this is an exception, oh well~ a good exception. |
| AGENT KELL 2007-10-03 ch 4, | abusekinda cool, i don't read the manga, so i don't know too much either, but i wanna know! but then i'm having exams right now, and i'll never be able to catch up :/ Ja! `IC-chan |
| Winter Thunder 2007-10-03 ch 4, | abuseAWESOME. As always. -is jealous- How do you have the time to do this?! I can only read this because it's so short! |
| Nymbis 2007-10-03 ch 3, | abuseThese are wonderful! You do such a great job of showing character relationships just by being subtle and you don't let the readers know more than they need to (if that makes any sense at all?). I like the wit and it is overall a great fic :) Doesn't hurt that it's about Pein and Konan, lol, the most awesome Akatsuki members ever. |
| IrisEclipsed 2007-10-03 ch 3, | abuseOne word: SEXY. SEX-Y. Holy crap, Pein's last line was so . . . hot. XD I love it. "She is young. Still impressionable. He has plans for her." That line sounds like something a pedophile would say, lol. AWESOME! I love it. |