 doodle808 3/7/12 . chapter 9YAY! I finished another one. Man, you have a lot of Harry crossover stories, and all of them are awesome. I was never actively interested in vampire!Harry stories, but this was done well. It was clipped, but it felt natural, especially with all the action scenes in between. Thanks for writing this. XD |
 Reader-anonymous 11/23/11 . chapter 9"It's rare to come across somebody who knows the stories." "I'm still not sure if he believed them." "Well I don't."
You don't believe them because you know what part of them is the truth and what part of them is lie.
A violent way to cover up tracks. But considering what Harry told about the Troopers... I don't know how can anybody consider it normal and proper army. They destroy civilians within their reach without reason.
Malcolm Reynolds... It's strange, to encounter them again. And it's strange Malcolm didn't know whom he was stealing from.
"I'm the only Vampire left in the Universe and they'd need my blood."
Wouldn't they be able to steal this somehow, from a hospital or a battlefield?
Why does Malcolm Reynolds mess with Harry again? Well, at least now they become allies, reluctant, but allies.
I'm glad only Luke is a vampire, and other 'creatures' are mindless. I know it's selfish, but at least Harry will not have to keep himself from killing them when fighting, will not have to worry about possibility of freeing them.
"It's been several hundred years since I've done something this crazy, perhaps it's time again. Let's bring Harry Potter-Ker Tal back into the limelight."
Ghouls... Who would want to create something that inhuman?
the need to never be alone.
It must have been difficult for Harry, about four hundreds of years without any vampires around. Any people whom Harry could become close to, would die, and Harry wouldn't give another human vampire's immortality, for it cannot be cancelled, and can be called a curse: seeing others die, civilizations change, while you are the same, and under strain of too much information.
Mile drop? I would have thought you insane. But you know your limits.
These were just two of the four ships that Harry had kept that had brought humanity to this system after the exodus of Earth.
Magnificent.
"That's not possible."
There may have been innocents on the ships... But so far I have seen only one reasonable human from Alliance, Luke, and he isn't with Alliance any-more.
Well, and the leader of the ships of Alliance is sensible enough to stand down.
Good luck. This Harry's seclusion, away from humans so that he would become myth instead of god, reminds me of Dracula in his castle (in positive sense; I don't associate Dracula with cruel murderer, unlike some horror films; I don't remember exactly, but in one of my favourite fanfictions Harry was Dracula's guest, and attended a ball in Dracula's castle, along with many others). I would like to look for other fictions about Harry and vampires, preferably without super-Harry inclination: with Harry being just a part of vampires' society, and not necessarily an Elder - with history, including when, where, how and why Harry was turned, or born, as vampire, or just started associating with them, if he doesn't become a vampire at first.
I am fascinated by vampires. I respect them for their ability to live for ages without considering themselves gods, to amass knowledge, to prevent possibility of war between humans and vampires... I want some peace and quiet, but not idyll - I do not believe it's possible to have a world without disagreements, though I loath massive wars and losses. I don't want a person to act as 'the Chosen', I want people to put forth a collective effort. Some people may be stronger, wiser, more dangerous, but they are neither gods nor monsters. |
 Ming Xiong 6/20/11 . chapter 9This was a great story! It is very rare to find a good and complete crossover fanfiction, especially with original characters (I usually stay away from them), but I really liked yours. I just have one thing to say: isn't "Icarus" a bad name for a space ship? After all, Icarus only flew for a very short time before falling to his death. And Nathan was a bit strange, I thought, because he accepted very easily the facts that his brother was a vampire, had killed their father, kidnapped him and got into a relationship with two other vampires. I do think that warrants a reaction. ) |
 Robin R. Smith 6/17/11 . chapter 9I absolutely love this story. It is one of my all time favorites. I have returned to re-read this fic more times than I can count, both while you were writing it and since you have finished. Alex fits so well into the story that it is often difficult to remember that he is an OC.
I would love to read a sequel. I can just imagine Harry rebuilding the magical world on a planet outside of the populated system, filling it with new vampires and other magical beings. I know you implied that vampires are all that are left of that world but River and her abilities (no matter how they were brought out) leaves room to believe that they are just dormant. Also, since he can basically live forever, he is free to return to Earth to see if any other remnants or creatures survived.
Please write more soon and don't let bigots get you down. If they have visited this site for any length of time, then they know that it is open to all pairings. Therefore, they should realize that there is always the risk of running into slash fics and take responsibility for their own actions in choosing to continue reading stories here instead of getting upset if they run across something they don't like or agree with. |