 number1avatarfanatic 2008-03-15 . chapter 1I think you are right about the 1 week thing. I liked that story! |
 cruciolicous 2008-02-25 . chapter 1you know what i realized? you write short, but startling fics. this definitely startled me! but i liked it. keep it up =]. |
 Demonking101 2008-02-06 . chapter 1ha ha funny I liked it keep it up |
 Trilobitemk7 2008-01-04 . chapter 1Once that it gets a grip of that idea, the unnamed new avatar whould make an awesome hippy duo with the guru.. Like,, dude, i'm my own father... dude, you're right... |
 angelwings 2007-10-27 . chapter 1 I came up with an idea like this, but mine is about him being reborn as his great grand daughter, and Katara being reincarnated into an earthbender, but if anyone takes my idea I will not hesitate to find you. But if you wanna read my story I'm trying to get it on :) |
 Ali 2007-09-28 . chapter 1 oh! Is your name Alisa? My name is too! I don't know anyone else w/ that name! okay, sry.
The story was kind of weird, but I liked it! |
 writteninchocolate 2007-09-08 . chapter 1*sobs histerically* that was so touching. i seriously almost cried. there was so much emotion in those few words...oh why? why did you write somthing so beautifully painfully sad? it's so horrible...but at the end...this is one of my favorites...ever. i will always be a fan of your work. |
 MoonlightSpirit 2007-09-05 . chapter 1Kinda confuing at firt, but very wel written. Since Aang is his son, that means Katara's in love with her son? Aang is his own son? Ouch, my brain hurts. |
 somebody's world 2007-09-04 . chapter 1That was really heartbreaking! It was well-written, though. I really liked how you added that little twist about the promise at the end. The only thing is, maybe you could have added a little more description in between the days.
I think you read that on the Avatar site, or from someone else who read it there. I don't know how reliable the site is; it's been wrong before, but that tidbit makes sense to me, so I believe it. |
 Alina Alone 2007-09-03 . chapter 1OMG! i loved it! it is sad that ang is his own son. so i guess katara can only love her son as a mother even though she knows her son is or was her beloved husband? |
 libowiekitty 2007-09-03 . chapter 1woah, this was just too awesome for words! It's a strange notion, (i once wrote a fic where Aang was his nephew), and i adore the way you wrote it. It's just, like, a little piece of talent.
Beautiful. |
 DuHSPaZZiNGFeL 2007-09-02 . chapter 1Yea. I agree. This was an interesting idea. it's true that the Avatar is born within a week of the death of the previous one. It says so on the Nick website, so obviously, it's official.
It is kind of messed up. I mean, Katara's husband is her own son and Aang is her son. Woo. It'd be strange if he was a girl. XD |
 Kyoshi7989 2007-09-02 . chapter 1that is a hauntingly beautiful story.
Favorites! |
 AirGirl Phantom 2007-09-02 . chapter 1Awesome one-shot! Well-written and emotional.
However, in my opinion, I don't think that the next Avatar is born only a few days after the previous one dies. After all, even a week-old fetus has a spirit, right? So I think that the previous Avatar would've had to die before the conception of his reincarnation.
Nevertheless, this is a great one-shot, and I loved it! |
 ChocolatStar 2007-09-02 . chapter 1That was great!
I love your quick, sharp sentences. They're so blunt and make everything so much more heartfelt and painful.
It was extremely moving. |