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AGENT KELL
2008-05-11
ch 1,
abusekyaa~
this was amazing! I wish writers like you and Goldberry would write more SasuSaku, really, ]: instead of NejiTen.

-FLAAILS-
I loved how you made Sakura brilliant and not falling to his charms immediately, but being professional, while the usually professional Sasu-chan, instead got captivated by her eyes, kyaa~

ASJDKAJSD; I'm afraid I might not stay coherant for long, so adios! xD
Lorena
2007-11-25
ch 1, anon.
abuseI was so sure I'd reviewed this already! After reading the newest installment (the NaruHina piece) I just had to re-read all the other ones (so don't trust your counter because I'm responsible for way too many page views!) and for some god-forsaken reason I hadn't reviewed this one and told you how much I love it! My only complaint is that we don't get to see what happened at the gym. I bet Sasuke tried to play it cool and embarrassed himself somehow. hehe, anyway, amazing job =)
Lil Lilypad
2007-11-13
ch 1,
abuseSweet.
Sasuke and Sakura are very in character.

"Weirdly enough, the high-ranking officer actually asked after Sarutobi’s secretary, who was fine, instead."
Is Sarutobi's secretary Kurenai? XD
les-liaisons-dangereuses
2007-09-28
ch 1,
abuseLovely... any chance of a sequel?
Kane Shi Megami
2007-09-05
ch 1,
abuseI loved them in this AU
Ohohen
2007-09-04
ch 1,
abuseAh! Oneof the famous NejiTen authors writes a SasuSaku one-shot, and does wonderfully in doing so. =D No surprise. It was wonderfully written, I enjoyed reading it. =D
Kirei Cherry Blossom
2007-09-04
ch 1,
abuseahh luved the fic^^...
nothing but blue
2007-09-03
ch 1,
abusei absolutely love these AUs!! :D please write another soon! this one was so cute. very creative! great job.
DewWater
2007-09-03
ch 1,
abuseLOL I liked that :)
Lau-kun
2007-09-03
ch 1,
abuseI think you better use MD instead of PhD. and mercury doesnt have a direct effect to the heart, it's more directed to the central nervous system but that's just a suggestion. go to and search for "mercury poisoning" for more information.

love ur AUs though. =)
Kriste-chan
2007-09-03
ch 1,
abusereading this made me realize how much i miss the world of fanfiction. ='(

love the AU, naturally, since i'm in the medical profession (and all the grey's anatomy/ House, MD love, of course!)... but i have a... eh... suggestion.

"PhD" means Doctor of Philosophy. They're not trained to do surgeries, nor are they licensed for medical consultations. I think what you mean by it is "Sakura Haruno, MD" (Medical Doctor). And since I caught whiff of aorta, you can also add Cardiothoracics. doctors specialize on a specific body system/ part, especially in surgeries, so they are only allowed to fiddle with their field of expertise.

There are other things as well about the "Mercury-aorta" thing but, that'd be butting-in already so, there... hope you didnt take it badly. =)
kriste-chan
2007-09-03
ch 1, anon.
abuselove the AU, naturally, because i'm in the medical profession, but i have a... eh... suggestion.

"PhD" means doctor of philosophy. they dont do surgeries, nor get asked for medical consultations. I think, what you mean by that is "Sakura Haruno, MD" (Medical doctor). i also caught whiff of cardio thingies there, you can also indicate Cardiothoracic. doctors in their specialites are only allowed to fiddle with their specialty.

hope you didnt take my suggestion badly.
hushhushyou
2007-09-02
ch 1,
abuseThis was a wonderful AU story! You seem to know a lot about surgery and what not. It's that or you just did a heck of a job making it seem like you knew everything xD. But I'm not saying that's a bad thing because this was exceptionally written! I loved the ending too. Sasuke was captivated by Sakura ^_^ How cute. Anywho, I hope to read more like this!
boko baba
2007-09-02
ch 1,
abuseBrilliant! Though I was surprised to see the last phrase, 'The End' at the bottom. This would have made a fabulous multi-chapter fic! But, it's amazing as it is.

Awesome job on this!
Laura-chan
2007-09-02
ch 1,
abuseShort but very, very nice :) Will you write a sequel? I hope so!
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