 Mrs. Optimus Prime 2009-08-07 . chapter 7Amazing! Great job! I like Kelly and Optimus's relationship. |
 Mistress Megatron 2009-03-07 . chapter 6Awesome chapter, can't wait for the next one. |
 Mrs. Optimus Prime 2009-03-06 . chapter 6Awesome job. Update! |
 Mrs. Optimus Prime 2008-10-27 . chapter 5AWE! I love it! YOU GOTTA UPDATE SOON! SWEAR YOU DON'T I'LL DIE! *falls back with hands over heart* Hurry before my heart stops beating. |
 Mistress Megatron 2008-10-23 . chapter 5YAY! I'm so glad you finally updated!
There were a few mistakes hither and thither, but you are still an excellent writer. Your writing is very thoughtful and thorough.
I love how Optimus and Kelly are together, and I can't wait until Megatron and Chris are.
Good luck on this story, along with your other stories too, and bring a quick update to the next chapter!
Yours,
Mistress |
 Mistress Megatron 2008-04-22 . chapter 4Quote: "Guys like to call girls hot and cute, but when they say they're beautiful or gorgeous, then they really, really, really like them." lolz I thought I'd share that with you.
*winks* I like what you got going here. Update soon please! |
 VampireQueenAkasha 2008-04-07 . chapter 1Oh I read this and it slipped my mind to review. Sorry! This one is very interesting and a clever crossover. (Robot animals and robots from Cybertron.). Hey, it would be funny to see a zoid as Megatron's pet! |
 Storm Blue Lightning Saix 2008-01-07 . chapter 3Pretty good so far, but you need to pay better attention to spelling and grammer. More descriptions and better sentence structure needs some inprovment as well. However, I'll be happy to help you if you need an editor. |
 Mistress Megatron 2008-01-06 . chapter 3*squeals* YAY! Megsie and Chris are getting together!
Wow, you're writing has really improved.
Can't wait until the next update! Email me when chappie four is up.
*pouts* Now I wanna do a zoids and transformers crossover. I remember watching this series of zoids too, I loved it. My favorite zoids were the Liger Zero and Berserk Fury. Gosh, too bad I don't remember hardly a thing about it.
Anywho, update soon pwease! |
 Tigerprime 2007-10-25 . chapter 1A very well written chapter and awesome to read too
Hope you contiue with this sweet story (I want more TF/Zoid crossovers :D )
Wonder if the TFs will compare the Zoids to the Transformers from Planet Animatros AKA The Jungle/Beast Planet? |
 cosmicfalcon 2007-09-05 . chapter 1? chapter please? hello? update and get a chapter up iv been looking for transformer zoids crossovers. |