That was good! Sad but good. You should write more jane/Neil fics, there sure isn't enough on the internet. Please keep writing!

Im totally of your opinion: no other instrumental song like "A child recalled" wouldve been better to listen while reading this fanfiction.

I was also very sad when I saw Neil and Jane dying, but I couldnt cry at this moment. Your fanfic brings this scene into my mind again and it made me sad again. I enjoyed it very much. -

Boohoo...! that's really sad ! But, NEIL IS MINE !

Wai! I love those two together! Too bad they never had a chance... I was so shocked the first time I saw that scene, I wasn't expecting any of the main characters to die! I liked Neil, not as much as Hein though. But I still found him amusing. Good fic, it was both sweet and sad at the same time. I hope you decide to write more on this couple! _

How sweet. *sob* I miss Neil and Jane! They shouldn't have died. The hangar scene always leaves me a little choked up. Though it's the song "Dead Rain" that always gets to me, because I know it's from that same timeframe.