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| Grapetheape 2007-09-03 ch 1, | abuseWhoa. That was really sad.. I'm actually close to tears. But it's really well written. I like how you wrote it in Catherine's point of view in the beginning and end. Very creative. |
| EmeraldMoonfire9213 2007-09-02 ch 1, | abuseThis is proabably one of the best perspectives I have ever seen on the issue of death. The idea of the number of deaths that occur for no reason, that are tragic yet unknown has been conveyed exceedingly well. This is an excellent piece of fanfiction and I hope you will continue |
| El Gringo Loco 2007-09-02 ch 1, | abuseAlready an accomplished writer, Witch Girl has presented us with one of the best done short stories I've read in a long time. Even early on it was obvious that a great deal of thought had gone into the subject matter. Later, reading the epilogue, the why behind it became all too clear. Whatever the subject matter or whoever the main character, I look forward to more of her work. |
| necira 2007-09-01 ch 1, | abusegood job on the story. I think that your note especially was a good touch |