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Chris ShadowMoon
2009-11-27 . chapter 7
Across the multiverse—at least the portion locked within similar loops—a pigtailed boy, a blond Jinchuuruki, a substitute Shinigami, a male Evangelion Pilot, a small-chested sorceress, and a fire-priestess-turned Senshi all sneezed.

Ranma, naruto, Ichigo, Shinji, Lina Inverse, and Rei Hino.

:D Very nice selection, if I do say so myself. You really should write litte substories to attack to the bottom of one of your main stories that focus around this plot idea. It'd be awesome XD
OrionTheHunter
2009-11-08 . chapter 8
Thanks for writing.
Story Weaver1
2009-09-18 . chapter 8
Harry's boggart fear was genius!

As was the genderbening at the end. Slytherin Harry is fascinating, especially a looping one. I'm really liking this Emerald Quaret.


Common Sense. Loved those loops. The Dementor One and the Fluff one. Really very amusing.

One more thing. Harry and Snape, drinking buddies, both WTF! and XD
gone119
2009-09-12 . chapter 8
Great story!
Choas Babe
2009-09-03 . chapter 6
Please tell me that Monarch has a cannon to come from. I'd LOVE to read his story.
Firehedgehog
2009-09-02 . chapter 8
that lats ones just evil.. lol
RockBane
2009-09-02 . chapter 8
*Snicker*

Can't wait to see what's going to happen during the next chapter!
keichan2
2009-09-01 . chapter 8
I had to re-read the first time loops chapter... I have to say that is WASN'T a chore :-D
(feared that I wouldn't understand the new chapter... Shouldn't have worried ;-p)
Too bad one can't laugh out loud in a hostel room ;-)

"I ... am your father." pft... pft... Bwahahahahahahahahaha! Oh! My! God!
I should have thought about this one, but you totally got me :-D
This was the bestest loop :-D

"And that is why you don't use the spell to view more than twenty degrees out of phase of normal space-time," Just out of curiosity: is it a reference to something, or was it just for fun? (and: was that Luna, or the Ravenclaw?)

The last one was very good, too.

Anyway, as always, I had a lot of fun reading this, and I wouldn't be against reading more soon (hint, hint, nudge, nudge ;-p)
Lord Edric
2009-09-01 . chapter 8
nice the last one really funny
Bobboky
2009-08-31 . chapter 8
awesome
Gundum M
2009-08-31 . chapter 8
nice ones
CelticReaper
2009-08-31 . chapter 8
now i normaly don't like harry potter but this makes me smile so i will an exception for this :D

update soon please
Wonderbee31
2009-08-31 . chapter 8
Heh, here's to more sexy Slytherin girls showing up, and they and Harry having lots of fun, as well as may Hermione in Dr Tounge mode, lots of 3D effects as well.
deitarion/SSokolow
2009-08-31 . chapter 8
"wand removed from his **." --> "wand removed from his arse." (In Britain, ** only means donkey)

Aside from that, excellent. Not as much unused potential as Ramengakure, but just as many laughs.
Tryptophan36
2009-08-31 . chapter 6
I absolutely love this chapter. Here is a truly worthy idea for a crossover. Fantastic. Wish you would expand it, but if the muses aren't talking, they aren't talking.
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