I really liked this story. It is really one of my favorites. Keep up the EXCELLENT work. Peace. ☺

aw, so cute! i to2ly <3'ed it! xD the ending was the best. u should write a sequel! ;)
~BunnyRose1995

I loved reading this fanfic and I especially love reading Zelda/Link pairings! I'm glad that everything turned out alright in the end.

EagleBlaze

this story is one of the best Zelda Fanfics I have ever read! It reminds me of Cinderella!!

I. Tink. Tis. Story. ASUM!

Yay! Zelda's pregnant! I bet Link will be a proud father.

Yeah, Din does have a rather immodest personality, but I think it suits her.

Keep up the good work! :D

Wow, great story!
I would like to make a couple suggestions, though.
How many times, in a normal conversation, do you use a person's name after you already have their attention?
Adverbs weaken the verb. However, you find that you get good at avoiding after a time.
However, in keeping with my self-made rule, I shall tell you at least four things that I liked!
The story moved along a lot better than I expected. I like that there was a lot of meaningful action in the story, and you tied up all of the loose ends. I also like Dark (sorry, Link, I like your evil double too!) quite a bit, although I must admit he confused me a little, with all of those weird metaphors, but I guess that must have been what you were going for. I like the way you portrayed Zelda and Link, and the way that Ganondorf simply couldn't resist drawing out the battle, and how that led to his downfall.
Oh, and the Goddesses... They made me laugh, especially Din. I like how you made them out to have personalities, and how they weren't just glowy people that came down from the sky with vague instructions.
Your lack of bad words! Stunning! The first I've seen in awhile! It's refreshing... :)
I believe you said something about dA? I have an account too. Maybe you should message me sometime! (Because I know I'll forget...)

Happy writing!
--Dark Northern Lights, aka w.chibivampire1313.

BEST STORY EVER!My mom kept yelling at me to stop reading this and go to bed,it was worth the time.ow i should go gheck if you wrote any other stories.But this is the best story ever.I love the part where Zelda meets Link.Not many writers on fanfiction have good stories,unlike you!Thanks for the spectacular story,i loved it,i truly did.

I LOVE THIS STORY!It is so sad and so interesting.I want to jump in the story and tell Zelda to tell Impa about her triforce mark.Sadly,i have to stop reading because i have to do my homework
.Sniff...Sniff...sob.

Good story, keep writing! It's funny when Din is being immodest or uncensored :)

My, my, Sakurelle! I must say that I am absolutely in love with this story, the characters and their demeanors. I'm enjoying the Swan Lake undertones of this chapter as well - very well done. You are a talent!

This was a truely wonderful story!

Some of the things I liked include the fairytale aspect, character development and descriptions.

I thought the fairytale angle you took was extremely well done. Too often when authors incorporate aspects from other stories they borrow too heavily making the story both obvious and straightforward. You were able to balance your own creativity with borrowed themes very effectively.

Your character development was also excellent. I like the personalities assigned to all your characters, especially Zelda and Link. You have a very unique take on your characters which kept it interesting.

Finally, I thought your descriptions were fantastic. Indeed, I think your whole writing style and mechanics are very solid.

All of that being said, I do have some criticism to offer.

I do feel that this story was a little strong on 'girl power.' Being a male (and surprisingly heterosexual despite reading these romantic stories...they invented the term 'hopeless romantic' for people like me!) I find your writing males to be somewhat lacking. However, given your gender and young age, you actually did surprisingly well. Therefore, I would suggest that this is probably something you should work on.

Another thing, while I really like it when authors mix stuff up in the Zelda world to tell their story, there are a few canons I don't think any story should breach. Those things you shouldn't breach include: triforce (Goddesses, relgion, etc), main characters (Zelda, Link and Ganon) and the master sword. I was not a fan of Ganon being able to weild the 'blade of evil's bane.' A big part of any Zelda story is that Ganon, or any evil character, could not use it. Another part I was not a fan of was the lack of the third triforce piece. Where was the triforce of courage? So those two parts I took a little issue with.

All-in-all, this was a fantastically original, well thought out, creative and inventive story. You have a great talent and I wish you the best of luck in your future endevors.

The Shadowy Anonymous Reviewer,
Mitch

Awesome story. I really liked the way you incorporated the three fairy tales into one. (Cinderella, Snow White, and Sleeping Beauty.)

AW!

ZeLink is teh cutest couple ever!

it figures that Malon and Ruto are the evil stepsisters(especially Ruto :P). it fits their character well. :P

awesome story. i compared it to a Cinderella+Sleeping Beauty crossover with Zelda. i hoep thatr was what it was supposed to be. anyways, definteley faving. awsome story.

Ooh, I truly enjoyed this story! And love how it all wrapped up at the end! One of my favorite fairy tales!

Also, I found the conversations between Dark and Gannondorf were slightly comical...
My only qualm about the story is a couple of the battle scenes are just a tad confusing. that's fine though :)

Zelink is such a cute couple !
I am one happy fangirl. Kudos to you for making such an awesome story! Good luck on future projects. :)