 mesmerizedbyceruleaneyes 2008-03-17 . chapter 1that was good. shitenhouji needs love! kintaro was so sweet, nya. ^^
people get caught up so easily, ne? forgetting all about the umbrellas and then forgetting kintaro... LOL.
you actually made them sound like real people. congratulations! |
 xxkoffeexx 2008-03-02 . chapter 1This was awesome. I really enjoyed reading it. And I'm glad it was in Shiraishi's point of view. He's kind of like my love in PoT. XD
Ah, team-bonding. It warms the heart, even if it's rainy outside. And I love the way you incorporated the title... inside joke! ^_^;;
Thanks for writing this. There aren't many of this 'kind' around, so it's refreshing. You're cool! |
 Guilty.Rose 2007-11-02 . chapter 1Hehe that was very funny. I liked it despite the fact that I don't watch Prince of Tennis. I heard you read it at creative writing club, this is Joy. |
 twilightpath 2007-09-22 . chapter 1*hug* I love this! It's absolutely hilarious! Including the comment at the end.
"Chitose looks thoughtful. "A pizza place, huh...?" He smirks. "I wonder if they have umbrellas there?"
Cracks me up every time I read it. Oh yeah, "Visual, Verbal, or Physical Harassment" is also funny. Note to self: review "Visual, Verbal, or Physical Harassment" sometime this century.
*gives cookie* This is for you. Heehee. |
 Shiraishi-K 2007-09-05 . chapter 1i love Shitenhouji, they're such idiots and you do a really good job at writing them (well, i kinda just said you're good at writing about idiots, but you know what i mean, right?...right?) anyway, if you have the time (and the interest) you can visit the new PoT forum at princeoftennis7. i'm in the Shitenhouji school there (as shiraishik) and we need new members (there are only two of us at Shitenhouji) or you can join another school if you want, any school actually. I suggest you check it out XD |
 forgotten hyoshi 2007-09-02 . chapter 1 I love it! Especially the Pizza Place joke. |
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