I LOVE this chapter. its really cool it just being summers and stuff. Do you have any more stories with OxC or at least with Charlie? I ssoooo want to read them she is a great character. Update soon!

LOL Aw the title TOTALLY goes with the chapter, lol. I loved it...as usual.

Alex

fantastic chapter!

i cant wait to see what happens next (;

please update soon ]]

cheers...

let send it to CL creator! X_x i can guarantee that they will add Ulrich Sister xD and maybe do this s5 xD

nah nah...

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to much sugar...hm...cheers for all those stories xD

OxC (Charlie!) is the best paring on this site XD mehehehe!

better then OxA ! :O O_O! zomg X_x what did i say...

whatever! cya! good luck with ideas X_x

YOUR OK! I was getting worried since it had been so long since I had seen anything from you or Lune-Solei. I know its silly but I always worrie about my favort authors when I dont hear from them in several months.

This chapter was realy good, I like the way you two write Odd, it's not exactly the same as the show, and its different than other authors on the site. You show that he's not actualy dumb, he just dosent take everything serriously. And while I'm a big time OddxSame shipper, your oc Charlie is about the only other paring for him I care for, I dont know whay so many people pare him with Sissy, or why so many people are mean to Jer, Aelita is about the best chanch he has.

I look foward to the next chapter of this story and Nights Worth Camping, also I know its a ways off, but I look foward to the next installment of the April fool series, Odds got his work cut out for him this time around lol. Til then Ja Ne!

Aw, that was adorable. I loved it Beautifully written as well.

Another great chapter! Poor Odd:( at least Charlie is back! Update soon please.

Artemis Fowl II

Meanie-head? Dumb-butt? Paint fight? WOW, lol, that's all I gotta say...

Alex

:) very good, do jeremy aelita next!

update soon

G.O.B.

AW! So cute. Jeez, does odd's feet smell that bad? Well i hope you update asap! Cause this story so funny!

You know, I've got this mental image of Yumi trying to explain to her mother how her clothes ended up covered in paint. The paint couldn't have been /that/ runny, could it?

A nice little Yumi and Ulrich moment. Well done in making them act their ages. Yumi definately knows how to press Ulrich's buttons, doesn't she?

Does Odd's body odour classify as a WMD? ;-)

BenRG's Rating: 7/10

i L.O.V.E it!

aw how cute i especially like the last one painted hearts i want more ulrich yumi plz

Very good Paint war, sounds hilarious!

Great stories!

I love Charlie, she's so funny! and over-protectivev brother is a nice twist