Uh... what happened to chapter 10? Not sure if anythings wrong or not, but just telling you...
But anyway... why, why, WHY did you have to kill Roy!? I mean, everyone does, but it always makes me sniffle. *sniffle sniffle*

Ohh Riza!! I keep wanting to yell, "Don't blame yourself!" but if she didn't, she wouldn't be who she is, now would she?

Crap! Being injured is one thing. Being sick is... this is not good. Pneumonia? GOOD JOB, ROY! You idiot! Between Scar and the homonculi, he shouldn't have been walking alone by himself anyway! AND he's injured! So he DEFINITELY shouldn't have been walking to work alone!

Awesome!!

It's a weird feeling, to read stuff about the later manga bits. There's no reason people shouldn't write about the later bits, they're so awesome!! They're more developed! But first you have all the anime-only people and that ended God-knows-how-long-ago! and it seems like if you write stuff about the later manga bits, no one gets them... it's really weird, huh? It's like no one else has caught up yet. But that's not really true.

-ahem- Thank you for listening to my tangent up there. XD
Roy can be so stupid sometimes. What the hell happened to him?

Aw, tragic chapter, poor Riza, the last moments before Roy died was written very well except for some spelling issues though. I think you missed chapter 10 because between this chapter and the last one, they don't connect.

Well done, keep up the good work

write an epilogue!!

What the heck just happened? Roy Mustang's dead.. And Riza just found out too.. Oh my. So sad, you know. But still, great work! keep on writing.

Erinn~

no way. you cannot kill roy mustang. (well, technically you can since you're the author but i hope you won't)

Omg... *in shock* NOES!!

AH!

no. No. NO! ROY DIED! NO...argh, good chapter. (sniffle) Roy died..roydied...

Whe! There is nothing like reading intense adventure while listening to Pirates of the Caribbean music! I is hyper!

CLIFFIE! Wa. Thanks for the update. I really like it. Suspense! gah. Great work!

Erinn~

Can't wait for the next one!

WHAT?!?! What's gonna happen? I'm so intrigued! Great work!

Erinn!

OMG, what is Envy doing here?! Please update soon! ^^

I love actions. Nice story!