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| miso-uzumaki-namikaze 2008-08-27 ch 9,  | abuseI appologize if i have not been to terribly polite. most of the time, it's my frinds get on my account and write reveiws for me. i never meant to offend you or anything. I dont allow them to anymore. i really enjoy the way you clearly express the character's emotions. the one thing that gets me is how hayate-san and Yuugao-san want to be together, but they know its wrong. that is what got me to read the story. So... once again, im sorry. |
| wildcatt 2008-08-11 ch 9, | abuseTerrific chapter, as expected. I am really enjoying your pacing and the way you guys take care to flesh out the other characters - their personalities, their roles in the storyline, their reactions to the events - instead of merely focusing on Hayate and Yuugao's relationship. Shou's "crueler" streak is interesting, as is Ryouma's surprising sympathy; I especially liked the twist with Daisuke's rookie worship and Ryouma's subsequent inability to just go ahead and bloody him up. God stuff indeed. |
| Tetsu-sama 2008-08-10 ch 9, | abuseI love the build up to the, I'm assuming, eventual Hayate, Yuugao confrontation. Keep up the good work! |
| KusajishiFuktaicho 2008-08-07 ch 9, | abuseyou finally updated~!-jumps with joy-...so~*curiously* are you still gonna make hayate die~? in some way or another? it would be mm...interesting if he's still the examiner and he STILL fought with Baki and he STILL died~actually what i mean is...wel you get what i mean(: update soon kay? |
| InARealPickle 2008-08-06 ch 9, | abuseLOVED IT! Another praise worthy chapter :D Who doesn't like protective brother figures and interrogation scenarios? |
| miso-uzumaki-namikaze 2008-08-04 ch 6, | abuseget chappy 9 out before i hunt you down with a fish. or a cinderblock. either way get it out! i already read this story 4 times!!1 |
| reader 2008-08-03 ch 8, anon. | abuseAh! I love this story and the couple. Although, I wish it had Hayate coughing and stuff. Hopefully the new chapter comes out soon. I can't wait. Keep it up. I love it, thanks! |
| miso-uzumaki-namikaze 2008-07-31 ch 1, | abuseGET THE NEXT F*CKING CHAPPY OUT! |
| miso-uzumaki-namikaze 2008-07-25 ch 8, | abuseOMG NEXT ONE! |
| zoloswordsman 2008-06-14 ch 8, anon. | abuseThis is getting GOOD! They finally kissed! Aww! ^^ |
| wildcatt 2008-06-11 ch 8, | abuseI was delighted when I saw your update in my inbox! Fantastic chapter as usual. This fangirl thanks you from the bottom of her heart for the beautifully executed kiss at the end. It was hot. (Understatement). I think you two have co-authored this wonderfully - the writing is superb and enjoyable to read, the characters interestingly designed and portrayed, the pacing nicely judged. Please do update soon! |
| Hebi R. 2008-06-11 ch 8, | abuseThanks so much for updating! |
| Tetsu-sama 2008-06-09 ch 8, | abuseoh my gosh, LOVED it!! That kiss scene was perfect, can't wait for the aftermath next chappie. |
| InARealPickle 2008-06-09 ch 8, | abuse::thuderous applause:: I can't tell you how thrilled I was to find this in my inbox! And as usual You guys have delivered another perfectly engaging chapter! I can't keep the grin off my face! Thanks, Pickles |
| An angel on ice 2008-06-09 ch 8, anon. | abuseomdaiz i loved that so much. keep writing cos this is one of my fav stories and i can never wait for the next update. brilliant ^-^ |