You show an impressive amount of knowledge within this fic, particularly in regards to Japan. First time I've ever come across shouchuu on . You ever tried it? Not bad, really. Incidentally, kanji? Hellish, to the point where one despairs of ever passing primary school level tests.

Anyway, some very nice writing here, though it's something of a shame that, considering this hasn't been updated in over a year, you're unlikely to continue this any time soon, if at all. Still, I'll be watching, for the sheer pleasure of reading something both well-informed and well-written. Keep on updating.

I love obscure, strong, female leads! And this story is just so well-written... I want more? Where did you go? I know it's not healthy to fall in love with unfinished fics that haven't been updated in almost a year, but I couldn't help myself... Please update!

This is an excellent story, and I'm rather sad to see that you two haven't updated for a while (couting the chapters on Livejournal which I have read and deem excellent as well). It's understandable of course. I really enjoyed how you two took a canon but not-very-much-talked-about couple and wove a world around them - complete with great grammar, followable and intresting plot line, and wonderful character development. So props to both of you on great writing, and I'm hoping for an update soon!

A story worth more reviews than given.

Though not much of a popular couple, you guys have the ability to make them one in this fanfiction world.

It's almost been a year since you guys updated, though, and I imagine it's pretty hard to write a chapter with 2 other authors, seeing as you all live different lives. I hope you guys get your stuff together. Remember: despite the number of reviews, there are people still reading!

I'd also like to mention something about the rating--
You guys mention things such as boners, ** and drinking, etc. Personally, I don't think that's something a 12 year old should be reading. Maybe you guys should consider changing the rating to a T. Maybe the rating change will attract more mature readers. (:

Character development, grammar, spelling, you name it-- it was excellent. Keep up the good work.

Update soon, because people won't be waiting forever!

Seriously this is the BEST FIC EVER! I love it!!
Thank you guys! Keep up the awesome work!

Yachiru-san

I've been reading this on the journal so I know you already have the next chapters there. I just want to say you guys rule!! You're excellent story crafters and I'm sure I'm not the only one who can't wait for the next piece!

I like it a lot. It's well structured and all the characters are actually believable!

I appologize if i have not been to terribly polite.
most of the time, it's my frinds get on my account and write reveiws for me. i never meant to offend you or anything. I dont allow them to anymore.

i really enjoy the way you clearly express the character's emotions. the one thing that gets me is how hayate-san and Yuugao-san want to be together, but they know its wrong. that is what got me to read the story.

So... once again, im sorry.

Terrific chapter, as expected. I am really enjoying your pacing and the way you guys take care to flesh out the other characters - their personalities, their roles in the storyline, their reactions to the events - instead of merely focusing on Hayate and Yuugao's relationship. Shou's "crueler" streak is interesting, as is Ryouma's surprising sympathy; I especially liked the twist with Daisuke's rookie worship and Ryouma's subsequent inability to just go ahead and bloody him up. God stuff indeed.

I love the build up to the, I'm assuming, eventual Hayate, Yuugao confrontation. Keep up the good work!

you finally updated~!-jumps with joy-...so~*curiously* are you still gonna make hayate die~? in some way or another? it would be mm...interesting if he's still the examiner and he STILL fought with Baki and he STILL died~actually what i mean is...wel you get what i mean(: update soon kay?

LOVED IT!
Another praise worthy chapter :D

Who doesn't like protective brother figures and interrogation scenarios?

get chappy 9 out before i hunt you down with a fish. or a cinderblock. either way get it out! i already read this story 4 times!!1

Ah! I love this story and the couple. Although, I wish it had Hayate coughing and stuff. Hopefully the new chapter comes out soon. I can't wait. Keep it up. I love it, thanks!

GET THE NEXT F*CKING CHAPPY OUT!