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Reviews For: The Woods

MBB
2008-02-18
ch 7,
abuseAgain you have surpising twists, that keep it a little different from the show and therefore interesting.

"Sharon’s eyes stared up at him, cold and dead."
I first though she was just uncontious, or taken over by her programming, it toke a few lines to realise her eyes were not methaphorically dead. :oops:

The auto-suicide might be a little OC as nothing ever happened to Sharon Agathon, but given the inconsistency of the Cylons on the show (from 'Gods mission' to 'vote by majority'), it is believeble enough.
Nice emphasys on how the other Sharon does not know what went on during her months on the Battlestar. On the show she always gets on about hoiw she gets blamed for Boomers actions, but conveniently forgets that she only knew them because she got a copy of Boomers memories implanted.

It was funny that while being Baltar's assistent, Gaeta did not know she would be ressurrected.

I'm glad that you have Chief Tyroll still caring for Boomer. It would would have been an easy way out to make him just the bad guy, and he'd have no reason now she did not shoot Adama. (and there are plenty of other Eight's to choose from, after all.)
Dybdahl
2008-02-09
ch 6,
abusemost brilliant thing
3.Hill
2007-12-25
ch 6,
abuse:o WOW! How is that gonna affect there relationship? When are they gonna see each other again? SO MANY QUESTIONS! lol :P

Plz UDS! :)
MBB
2007-11-06
ch 5,
abuseNice story. When I read the pairing I assumed it would be set during their time under president Baltar on New Caprica. This was a nice surprise.
And nice twist with the 'pregnancy' plot
Tweeky
2007-09-17
ch 4,
abuseGreat update and and I can see Felix and Sharon-"Boomer" being a couple. But I do wonder in the latest part where she throws up, if it's morning sickness as in if she's pregnant.
Darlian
2007-09-06
ch 3,
abuseInteresting fic! I like the premise, and it's not a pairing I've seen before. :) Just a suggestion; you may want to consider separating different parts of each chapter with dashes to make it easier to read. Other than that, great start, Dannii.
Daz
2007-09-04
ch 1,
abuseIntersting story about the romance, will felix allow the cyclon to be discovered or will he save his love and suffer the consequences.
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