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WINtEr SuMmEr AuTuM SpRiNg
2009-09-24 . chapter 13
i LOVE THIS STORY !
Joycy
2009-09-14 . chapter 1
Wow...it's a heartfelt story...
Someone aka Me
2009-09-04 . chapter 13
I love this story!!~!!~!!~!!
@(*_*)@
sm
2009-08-20 . chapter 13
I read the story in one go, and while it was well-written, I couldn't sympathize with Hermione's character at all. She committed adultery and tried to rationalize that to Ron later, then hid her pregnancy from both men, and somehow Ron's family and eventually Ron himself accepted that so she could have her "happily ever after?" Completely unbelievable in my opinion. I could believe that Hermione needed to live her life while Ron was in a coma, although I don't condone the adultery, but it would have been more believable to encounter many more obstacles than she did. The only person I could sympathize with in this story was Ron, who deserved some happiness after what he went through.
StarMimi
2009-08-19 . chapter 13
Loved it! Great job :)
Ainsaboo
2009-08-18 . chapter 13
Aw.. Nice ending!
Amrei
2009-08-18 . chapter 13
Very nice end.
So it all turned out well, yay!
And Hemrione got through to do the right thing and didjn't settle for the compromise the whole situation was.
Poor Ron, but well, he'd have been unhappy with her, so it's for good.
All in all a great ff,
I'll definitly read your next one as well,
Amrei
bringITback
2009-08-18 . chapter 12
oh no, don't tell me the baby's dead before it even got a proper shot at life. . .

good chapter even though i highly dislike the cliffe:/
UPDATE SOON!

xoxo
kat
Knightvanilla
2009-08-17 . chapter 12
Ah, is he alive? damn blaise for running out, meh,
Weaselbee
2009-08-17 . chapter 12
This is actually a very interesting twist to the Hermione is pregnant storylines. I hope you'll update again soon!
Ainsaboo
2009-08-17 . chapter 12
ERGH! You had better update soon! *Sigh* Blaise... They all need therapy. I think I need therapy...
Amrei
2009-08-17 . chapter 12
Oh no!
Please tell me he isn't dead...
But doesn't one have to slap a child softly on the back or something so it starts to breat...?
...Yes I've no idea, I'm just thinking of an explanation why he has to be alive ^-^
So we had Blaise. And a really compromising situation (as well as a really fast update, thx for that ^-^).
And you're right, this is one the most evil cliffhanger I've seen so far.
Hm, just wondering... Does running after Blaise count as making up her mind? ^-~
As always looking forward to the next chapter,
Amrei
P.S.:Since you're about to finish this story, have you already thought about writing another one after this one?
voldyismyfather
2009-08-17 . chapter 12
oo no please continue
Amrei
2009-08-17 . chapter 11
Another chapter!
And though you said it wasn't edited there weren't any mistakes I noticed.
Hm, bad timing I'd say.
And I really feel sorry for Ron. I mean for him no time past and out of a sudden just everything is different without him beeing able to do anything.
So, yes, it's understandable that Hermione went on with her life eventually, but for him who had no say in this, it really sort of looks like cheating...
So Hermione didn't get through to decide how to handle things with Ron again.
Hm, she better decides sometime now, I'd say.
And Blaise is there!
Yay, for that ^-~
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter,
Amrei
Ainsaboo
2009-08-16 . chapter 11
YAY! And, thanks, you did give away this bit in your PM.
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