aww... very sweet. I seriously love the rain. It doesn't seem depressing to me at all. Very good job!

Wow, this was beautiful. The imagery was spectacular, so much better than almost everythings else on the sight. Your description was able to paint a picture in my head, something not a lot of authors here can do. And I love the characterization, the way you seemed to capture both characters personalities. This is what Cleris is all about, the little moments between the two that don't need to be romantic, but just need to be there.

My one suggestion though would be to cut down the use of the word so. It's good to use it a couple of times to set up the end sentence, but you could stand to lose one or two uses of it, just to make the flow a little better.

Other than that, this was a spectacular story, and I expect to see many more out of you.

I like it. Especialy since I watched Advent Children last night and this fic goes with the scene after he defeated Sephiroth and looks up at the sky as it rains.
Nice oneshot
~Beeria

Aww, this was so beautiful! I loved the symbolism in this, the rain and the empty streets. Great job!! ^^
I'd love to read more of your Cleris stories, they're awesome =)