Reviews for The Daily Dealings of Kira and Cagalli

Reviews For: The Daily Dealings of Kira and Cagalli

inulov4eva 2007-10-12 ch 1, anon.	abuseI meant CRY* not, girl. sorry. >.> UPDATE
Inulover4eva 2007-10-12 ch 5,	abuselol physics IS BORING! update THIS story, its what comes first!! im leaving for the weekend but when i get back you better have this updated mister!! :hugs: plus. i broke a nail reviewing this story, so, you should feel loved, cause ima girl now.
Mirinee 2007-10-11 ch 2,	abuseLOL!! So Mwu does /that/ when no one's around? XD Haha, the Captain overheard him. This is a little weird, but random humour never hurt anyone. ^^ P.S. It's "Endymion".
Rawr4cookies 2007-09-29 ch 4,	abusethis is good, keep it up, super funny and hah, you used Cass' name.
Anikitt 2007-09-16 ch 4,	abuseI love this fic for three reasons. 1. Mu is one of the most hilarious characters ever. 2. I'm a Hibikicest(KiraxCagalli) shipper ;-; I know it's wrong. 3. You have the ability to make a fic have a high vocabulary and not be boring. Please continue!
Anonymous 2007-09-14 ch 4, anon.	abuse...? Arza? SEED takes place entirely within the Earth-Moon gravitational system, with the exception of individual events which also involve Mars and Jupiter. Where the heck did the Archangel manage to find a habitable planet, and how the heck did they get there? I'm pretty sure there aren't any within a couple dozen lightyears of Earth (at least), and the Archangel can't travel much faster than conventional spacecraft.
Inulover4eva 2007-09-11 ch 4,	abuseROFL. hahahaha, hahaha, this is GENIUS! gawd. Flaga is simply adored in this, in my eyes. Man, you need to be getting more reviews!! people are just not bright enough to realize the hilarity of this story, lol, damn them all. and i read the anon. review and then what that crewmember/greasemonkey defended kiras' testeterone haha, i fell off my chair laughing. quotes of the chapter? “Yo! Did you see what happened to those two here earlier?” “Yes. The blonde struck Kira with two punches, ergo the inevitability of unconsciousness from ere brain sloshing and rough playfulness. However, whilst the crux of the blow may seem to have render Yamato unhealthily dazed, twas a deception on Kira’s part withal. Kira, in his slyness, executed a stratagem to lull that Orb woman into emotions of ultra alarm by mimicking his injured state. That blonde denizen of Orb initially was deceived by him, and was frantic. But upon discovering a small grin on Kira’s lips, she simultaneously expressed relief and outrage with screams. She is now chasing him,” replied the mechanic, not looking up. Shocked that he never noticed such a crewmember before, Flaga couldn’t help but stop in his tracks and let himself become mesmerized by the linguistics of that greasemonkey… oh my god, his vocabulary is…ginormous! that was simply too classic.
Patriot-of-USA 2007-09-10 ch 4,	abuseWow! Very impressive! I'm really drawn in by the savvy language put into the story. Quite humerous, but very clever too. I don't find enough of these kinds of fics. You obviously have a writer's talent. The plot itself is very humerous as well. You have captured the very essence that is Flaga. He's quite in-character. Quite the hoppy he has taken on eh? I still can't tell where you're going with Cagalli and Kira; though I imagine that's the way you want it. I look forward to more!
Inulover4eva 2007-09-09 ch 3,	abuselol. I love you, names like "Cassandra" is so, everywhere (>.>) I don;t think of it as "borrowing" coughstealingcough AT ALL! haha. oh god, this story is simply hilarious, I am seriously laughing every other second. “Child?! A child?! Kira, I do not act like a child! Ough, you make me so mad!” said feisty Cagalli. Pow! said her feisty fist. HAHAHA. and the "guesstimated" haha, I love your play on words, really, this quickly becoming a favorites. must. tell. friends.
Anonymous 2007-09-09 ch 3, anon.	abuseIf you think Kira lacks testosterone, you need to rewatch both series. Kira tends to be portrayed as gentler and in some ways a little more airheaded in fanfiction, but Kira was probably one of the gutsiest pilots in the series, and certainly one of the more aggressive. To the best of my knowledge, Kira hit Cagalli just as many times as she hit him throughout the series (one blow each). That being said, I do like your work. Minor quirks in your characterization are forgivable because your characters are still plausible and you are consistent in how you portray them. Mwu is hilarious! I also like the idea of a character snooping around and trying to unearth a hidden relationship between two others. It's a format not often applied, and it works well in this context. I hope you can keep yourself interested long enough to finish this fic. It'll make a good addition to the small but growing KxC library on FFN.
Solarys 2007-09-08 ch 3,	abuseInteresting story; I LOL'd at it... IMO Kira is more compatible with Cagalli than he is with Lacus, but I think narrating a story like this from a 3rd party's (M. L. F.) POV seems to over-complicate things a little. Anyway, it seems to work pretty well for you, so it's all good. Oh btw please don't use my username for a character lol...
moi 2007-09-06 ch 2, anon.	abuseinteresting idea.. looking forward to see future chapters
Inulover4eva 2007-09-05 ch 1,	abuseHaha, this is hilarious!! I love Flaga, haha the conceited (whom has every right to be) ever-seeing man! OKay, first off, YAY! you wrote a Kira and Cagalli, I heart you. you simply MUST continue. Cagalli's and Kira's personality were so on key, and I love Kira is so outforward when it comes to Cagalli whereas with everyone else he treads so lightly not to hurt their feelings. As you see within the series, the slap and all their banter, they don't go easy on each other, something amazingly awesome between the two. Now, as far as construction. you have a great set up, I already see your chosen path of naration and you do it well. But, just some story plotline advice. To keep things interesting, a character shouldn't be suspicious or catching on to soon, IMO, Flaga seems a little TOO interested in their subtle relationship/friendship and it just makes it...all the more unreal? I know this is fanfiction and meant to be however we wish it to be, thus the beauty of it. But I think readers prefer to journey with the characters themselves or with the person whose POV is the main thing of the storyline, and see for themselves what the characters see and thus draw their conclusions by the middle/end of it. you see? So for Flaga to think automatical something is going on between them over a simply banter was a bit, too much. but least the inquiry is there. so it serves to perpetual is suspicion and what I would guess, his observance of what happens. hehe, great job though and update soon, kay?
krisse 2007-09-04 ch 1, anon.	abusewell...I like it...when will you continue this story of yours? i really like to see Kira and Cagalli together even thought they are siblings...I think they are more compatible...hehehe

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