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| Hypedupgirl 2008-01-15 ch 1,  | abuseyou should make this longer, its really good |
| Tobizaru 2008-01-01 ch 1, | abuseAwesome start, very interested to see what you do with it please continue it. |
| the grey mage 2007-10-29 ch 1, | abuseah! it cant just end there. gah. my head. |
| Rihaku 2007-09-16 ch 1, | abuseI wonder in what direction you'll take this fic after the last chapter...it's bound to be interesting. You have a strong characterization of Ino. Why is this only a two-shot? I think it has potential for more, with the way Chapter 370 was. Oh, yeah, congratulations on your C2 as well! 7th out of nearly 1900 is impressive indeed. Rihaku |
| Hara Kazuma 2007-09-09 ch 1, | abuseHope to see an update soon, the setup for more material is very good it is enough of a cliff-hanger to catch interest, but timed well so not to annoy the reader |
| Snickerz71 2007-09-08 ch 1, | abuseGood story! Makes alot of sense. This is my kind of story! |
| ranma hibiki 2007-09-04 ch 1, | abusethis sounds promising. wonder how it will turn out |
| Chigirl 2007-09-02 ch 1, | abuseVery good start! Original! Cant wait to read more! |
| IncandescentOne 2007-09-02 ch 1, | abuseah that was so tantilising >.< want more! Bet you thought of this after that scene with Jiraiya and Tsunade on the bench? :D awesome-ness was spawned at that point in time! |
| j.c.k.tm 2007-09-02 ch 1, | abusenaruino friend ship u got my hopes u for nothing maybey ishouldve read the sumery but its still a very good story |
| EfrainMan 2007-09-02 ch 1, | abuseVery interesting NaruIno twist to the current revelations, I liked it a lot. There were three distinct spelling/grammar errors, and for a fic this small, it's kinda glaring. Otherwise, it was VERY enjoyable :) "I no read the letters" now? "they became the most beautiful woman" women. "there were not a child" was? Can't wait for a part 2 :) |
| Dark Hope Assassin 2007-09-02 ch 1, | abuseOh, nice story so far! I love the idea! Nicely put. ^_^ You write in a very interesting way and I can't wait for the next part and how you deal with Ino's revelation. xD |
| DarkSanctuary59 2007-09-02 ch 1, | abuselemme guess...Kushina is naruto's mother and she was ino's mother's best friend...am I right? Well it's just a guess...anyways update soon |
| bluegreenfishey 2007-09-02 ch 1, | abusei'm hooked on your story can't wait to see what happens next,so please update soon ^^ |