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| KaosKitten 2008-05-27 ch 1, anon. | abuse:] I loved it. The ending upseted my stomach. No really, my stomach is like on fire. Well it might be the fact that I have a disease D:. LOl Why am I laughing? No idea, but great story. :D -5 stars- :] |
| theOrange T A N G . 2008-04-07 ch 1, | abuseCruel. xD; Great writing, though. :] |
| Rosepetal Dawn 2007-12-07 ch 1, anon. | abuse... O~O Oh my god...! The ending made me cry...! I'm still crying now, actually. It's so unbeleivabley heart breaking! Dx *sob* But... so well written! -Rosepetal |
| givegaarasomeAI 2007-11-09 ch 1, | abuseOMG the ending made me cry ;_; |
| Pr0fesser 2007-11-07 ch 1, | abuse/droll You are a amazing writer! ^^ |
| 1000stars 2007-11-03 ch 1, | abuseT.T so nice! the ending! |
| SasukesEmoLollipop 2007-11-03 ch 1, | abuseLoved it! I found this story very incredible and moving. I wasn't expecting the last bit and it made me cry so hard! I had to leave the room because my sister was like right next to me. Also this is the first Hikaru and Kaoru (OHSHC in general) fanfic I've ever read. It's still very beautiful and deep great job! ^^ Hope my first Hikaru and Kaoru fic will be just as great when I eventually write one x3 Emo~ |
| xdarkbeforedawn 2007-10-29 ch 1, | abuseomg its so god *sniffle* and sad, im so close to crying right now T.T |
| Bjafi 2007-10-20 ch 1, | abuseOMG! THAT'S SO SAD! stupid kaoru! *near tears* What a great fanfic! It was perfectly executed, even though there wasn't a happy ending... I guess they all have happy endings. this just sets it apart. ^_^ Wow that was sad... I'm gonna go eat ice cream. (after adding this to my faves of course) |
| layafel 2007-10-14 ch 1, | abuseaw that ending was so sad it made me cry... cant wait for something more from you. |
| Pink Ikawa 001 2007-10-06 ch 1, | abuse-sniffle- that was so beautiful, but so sad! i wish they didnt have to be seperated! T_T |
| mizzshy 2007-09-28 ch 1, | abuseAww, that made me cry, it was so darn cute! ^w^ |
| A.N.one and only 2007-09-27 ch 1, | abuseHey A.N. here. I just wanted to say that I was so moved by your story that I came up with something for it. I won't mess with it. Its your story. There were just some unanswered questions in it, that's all. If you wnat me to tell you what I made up then email me at a.n. -A.N. |
| combo-bass 2007-09-25 ch 1, | abuseAww, this is so melancholic but I love it very much. The way you wrote the boys was perfect! Thank you for this wonderful gift-fic. I'm such a terrible person for not reading it sooner but college really is kicking my ass this year. I hope you can forgive me. *puppy eyes* So thanks again and I'll try not to be such a bum the next time someone does something so nice for me. Can't wait for more! ^_^ -combo- |
| Inu Romantic 2007-09-23 ch 1, | abuseWOW! i really loved this fan fiction, the characters were perfect, and the sadness at the end was awsome although sad, it was a perfect storuy. i want to read more, this story should be longer! LOVE IT! |