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Tianna M.V.A.
2009-11-24 . chapter 67
I cant believe you killed Lezander! OMG :O

He was my favourite character, which is surprising since he was a vampire, and I tend to not like them much anymore. I still cant believe you killed him. I cried for pretty much the entire chapter, and I just didnt want to read anymore.

*crawls into corner and mourns death of favourite character*
Ashans21
2009-11-24 . chapter 2
Oh shite one of Voldykin's Horcruxes
Escape my reality
2009-11-23 . chapter 1
‘Not people,’ Harry said to himself, ‘They’re muggles.’

wow. do you realize how racist that sounded? its like he thinks normal people are completely beneath hi. were you aiming for that?
Miss C Riddle
2009-11-16 . chapter 58
i think i know why voldemort was scared, maybe because of what he did to orion in chapter... 43, was it? the bit were he obliviated him...
Miss C Riddle
2009-11-14 . chapter 47
WHAT! he...he's alive! omg orion is soo going to kick tom's butt! or dumbledore's depending on what might have happened
Miss C Riddle
2009-11-13 . chapter 34
What was tom going to say!!? orion is his- what?! i must find out!
Miss C Riddle
2009-11-11 . chapter 21
omg! not neville! oh well, i'm gona make a wild guess are they gona try and get rid of neville instead of har- orion!! lool great fic, gonna go read more now byye!!
Schoggi
2009-11-11 . chapter 67
great story! Well written, inventive and elaborate. Thank you for that wonderful read!
sheens142
2009-11-09 . chapter 29
i really like the slow buildup of their relationship, it makes it
so much better coz i'm always anticipating the next confrontation between orion/LV
excellently written so far, the plotting is well done since it must've been quite difficult
to integrate the real happenings of JK's books with your own AU story. kudos!
:D
oh just one thing, i really hope orion doesnt become a necromancer :S haha i guess i'll have to keep reading to find out :O
PeacefullStar
2009-11-09 . chapter 63
:D
sheens142
2009-11-08 . chapter 1
loving it so far! :D
can't wait to see what happens, but i can tell im going to enjoy this story ^^
maybe because strong dark pureblood harry is just so amazing *fangirl sigh*
jaderook
2009-11-05 . chapter 1
I read the whole thing. It was nothing less than riveting. You weave an amazing tale. I quite enjoy the complexity of your plot and your Dark Harry is still Harry, I think. I can't wait to immediately begin reading the sequel.

Also, for someone whose first language isn't English, your grasp of English is better than more than a few native speakers I've seen. I will tell you that one thing I've noticed a lot is that you use the word casted quite frequently. When speaking of the past tense it is cast, the same as it is in the present tense of the word. It's one of those words that doesn't adhere to the usual rules. (BTW, Argentina is a lovely country. I was there years ago and had a wonderful time. I'd love to go back some day.)
reflex
2009-10-30 . chapter 67
Fascinating i really loved it I can't imagine how i missed an exam just to continue reading. The idea is really original i am starting to hate old people and their manipulating ways and am looking forward to reading the sequel.
Patches0456
2009-10-28 . chapter 67
OH MY FUCKING GOD! THAT STORY WAS INSANE! I just started reading you're story a few days ago, and I couldn't stop reading. When ever I wasn't at college or work, I just had to read your story! This was the best story I ever read! This is better than the original Harry Potter! As soon as I'm done here I'm reading the next story! By the way, sorry bout not writting reviews before, but I couldn't stop reading!
The plot line is incredible, so detailed and thought out, you're one of the most gifted writers I ever had the pleasure of reading. As for the story it self, words cannot begin to describe how incredible it was. This is not a story, it is a work of art! This goes beyond fanfiction, this is a story, no, a masterpiece in it's own accord! I am going to read the nxt story just as fast!
As for the story plot line, I can't wait to see where it goes! My only hope is that Harry stays with Voldemort! Too many stories have been written where Harry kills Vold. They make the best couple, I really hope they stay in love! Well, gotta go, got more chapters to read, keep up the incredible work.
Wildfury
2009-10-27 . chapter 1
cool
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