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mabelreid
2007-09-02
ch 1,
abuse“Any other night, and this would turn into a rousing round of phone sex, you realize.

I love that line. Your muse does very well on drugs. Some wonderful fluff. Thanks for sharing.

As one who recently had surgery I sympathize with the need for drugs. I hope you are doing better. I look forward to more of your stories
ReJo
2007-09-02
ch 1,
abuseI love your one-shot snapshots of their lives!
RockinLizzy
2007-09-02
ch 1,
abuseFirst of all let me say that I hope you are ok, and that everything gets better for you health-wise.

But, I absolutely love this fic. It is just so cute, with the whole other cops teasing them thing, and then Danny wanting to ask her to marry him over the phone(that was hilarious). But, I want to thank you, because this definitely put a smile on my face when I sorely needed it. :D

I'd really hope you continue with these. You just write Danny and Lindsey so well.
Yemam2422
2007-09-02
ch 1,
abuseI loved this story. It was such a sweet, wonderful, realistic snapshot of Danny and Lindsay's relationship - their teasing, their mutual comfort and, of course, their love. Loved the humor and lightheartedness of it all. Great work!
twinkeyrocks
2007-09-02
ch 1,
abuseThat is the sweetest thing ever!! I really love "Ah is that monroe?" So good
Mrs.Lindsay Messer
2007-09-02
ch 1,
abuseI am confused as hell. Danny proposed to Lindsay in The Sandlot. It's like this story is going backwards and not forwards.
TBD
2007-09-02
ch 1,
abuseOh, I'm glad you're back!
I just loved everything in this fic: the catcalling, them trying to pull away from each other, how comfortable they are together. Great, great job :)
marialisa
2007-09-02
ch 1,
abuseThat was great! You are going to write a follow up aren't you? I want to see what happens when he proposes.

Hope you are feeling better after the surgery :)
notesofwimsey
2007-09-02
ch 1,
abuseWell, if this is what drugs do, hook up, girl!

Nice images, like Danny wrapping her in his overcoat to keep her warm, and some good byplay with the other cops. I think you need to start numbering these so we can read them in order!

Take care - hope the surgery went well and you start to feel better soon.
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