Excellent! It reminded me of the anime-it may as well have been a scene from it!
The suspense was amazing!

I love that show! And I really liked this fanfic...very in character and greatly written. Awesome job! *favorites*

Interesting take on the meaning of 'alien'. I loved it! So suspenseful and I honestly could see that happening in a panel of the Alien Nine manga or a scene in the anime. Good job!

Also, if you don't mind, could I add this to my C2 of fan fic rec's? If you would rather not have your piece in my C2 then just send me an Author's PM and I'll remove it A.S.A.P

Again, good job.

please make it a bit longer..i want to know what to Yuri after that.Did she turn into a monstrous alien or something?If you don't mind please?