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YuugisGirl
2009-11-27 . chapter 11
Yes this is the same YuugisGirl that has commented on this story before. I really need to stop reading this...This makes it what, about the billionth time I've been through it! Despite having read this story countless times, I must say I'm still head over heels in love with it. Numerous reads and it STILL takes me on an emotional rollercoaster each time. Which is why I felt the need to leave a review for the overall story again. I'm not really one for rereading fanfiction. Published novels I'll go through multiple times, but I find that most writing on this site is more of a one time heart jerker to fall in love with at the moment and then to be placed back on the shelf for good. Your story, however, is the exception to the rule. Very few other stories have won me over like this. And could you believe that you're the author of two of them? "Happiness is Not a Fish you can Catch" is most definitely my favorite puzzleshipping piece ever written.^^ I know it's probably not a lot coming from some random user on this site, but I would just like to tell how very much I enjoy your writing and your humor in particular. Your Malik is my favorite portrayal of his character I've ever seen. ^^
Please keep up the amazing work. I can't wait to read that sequel!

-YG

PS: I swear, every time I read this story my heart breaks a little more over Atemu's situation...T_T
mirrohayou
2009-10-17 . chapter 12
I completely and totaly love this fic and you for writing it, I don't usualy like depressing but this was masterful, yaya you, you should get a sugary item of your choice for this :). I'll keep a look out for any future works from you.
untill then.
Kyashii
2009-06-25 . chapter 12
FANTASTIC. That's the only word for this! This is the third time I've re-read your story, and I can't help but love how beautifully written it is every time I read it. I would be overjoyed to see a sequel!1one! SPLE!!
YamiMisao
2009-05-18 . chapter 12
I... can't believe I never read this story sooner. I absolutely LOVE Kleptoshipping and it's quite sad that it -so- hard to find good, well written ones. This is definitally one of my favorites, and even though it ended a few months ago I just HAVE to review amazing stories!

First off, the pace. Something that often irks me is that sometimes authors/authoresses rush their plotlines, or it's so excrutiatingly slow you lose interest. But the pace of this story was perfect.

Also, I really loved how you managed to keep it so true to the original stories plot that it was as if you could really just fit this story right in there. Little details such as the fact that Bakura and Ryou pretty much -never- communicate, and keeping it to where they still share bodies. And sticking with that.

The characters where also very in-character, though obviously altered in some sense to fit the situation, but I was really impressed especially with Yami Bakura's personality in the story, you did an amazing job.

... And Im pretty sure this is the longest review I've written like, ever. xDD But I really enjoyed reading it, and I do hope for a sequel! Hopefully maybe Yami will get some loving, I feel sorry for him. xD Though Im not sure how that would work... the only other left out one would be Yami Marik, and... I dont see that working out. -laughs-

Anyways... -stops rambling now-
CosmicEssence
2009-03-08 . chapter 12
Ahh the end? NO
OMG i cant believe this one is over. And yet i'm glad it is!
lol that is totally contradictory but then this entire fic has been just that on the emotions and character scale. Usually when reading a fic its one way or the other with the barest of hints to the other 'side'. This one, from the get go, heart-breaking and yet delightful all at once.

And this last chapter certainly captures the realtionships, 'soul-split', loyalty to one and desire for another and impossible mixture of mortals with immortals that love each other. Its all so coarse and dark and confusing and hot and yummy and grin-tastic!! ^__^

** i love this one! Its perfect! in a realistic and heavy on the umm now is the word i want wicked or morbid? (or maybe sadistic?) side??

Anyway, YES please a sequel would be great!! I wont knock it till ive tried it, but i must admit i'm not sure how Atemu's gonna be workable. I mean in such a sequel you would need, obviously, to show how this 'arrangement' has been working out (or not knowing you), which means Ryou and Malik scenes, Yugi and Bakura scenes (which i SO cant see Yami no Yuugi peeking in on) and then, if your're gonna turn this into an even more difficult love-quad..a..gon (sorry i cant remember my bloody shapes now :P) then who is Atemu gonna be going for?? Not Yami no Malik surely!! Ahh well whatever, a sequel would still be awesome as well as some more Atemu perspectives :P

Thank you so much for this one...officially in my top 5 for favourite YnB/Yugi fics *^__~*
Ana
2009-03-05 . chapter 12
Amazing stuff. Their relationship is complicated and I loved the ending. You did well keeping Yami B in character which made this story great. I'm glad ended up together even if it wasn't their first choice. Great job. ^.~
~Ana~
dragonlady222
2009-03-04 . chapter 12
Good chapter. Poor Yami is heartbroken. I feel bad for him. I'm glad Yugi and Bakura are happy.
Syhren
2009-03-02 . chapter 12
"And my birthday only reminds me of how old I am… " Pff-- you had a great birthday XP And I DO know how old you are, you oldy-mcolderson.
tinkletimekelly
2009-03-01 . chapter 12
Nice!
YuugisGirl
2009-02-28 . chapter 12
I LOVE YOU SO MUCH! *tackles you then rights herself blushing* That ending was so...hilarious and depressing...I LOVED IT! Except for Yami's ending...I hate what happened to my Yami... *hugs him* I guess it's just the puzzleshipper in me but I was still pulling for YamixYugi in the end even though I love Klepto! Poor poor Yami...He doesn't get ANYBODY! I really do think you should write a sequel from his point of view and SOON! I love this story with my heart and soul. For once Yugi goes on a gult trip. I like that aspect because you never do get to see his character "break the rules" so to speak. Truely amazing. I want MORE! *wines* I need to get a life I know. And stop rambling in my reviews... anyway...thank you SO much for writing this. One of my favorites on the . And I've read A LOT of fan fiction! XD Can't wait to see more from you soon!

*grabs Yugi and Yami and all three wave* BYE!

-YG
lupita
2009-02-28 . chapter 12
wow i thought this story was finished already lol...oh well pleasant surprise. good chapter i'm curious about thsi sequell...write it, adn write it soon. do it.DO IT.
HikariTenshiYamiTenshi
2009-02-28 . chapter 1
rollercoaster...

that is all I thought of at first.
so...Yugi loves Yami and Bakura? (AH! I'M SO CONFUSED!)
God I feel sorry for Yami...

that was brilliant,
Syhren
2008-12-07 . chapter 11
Zomg, such a wonderful chapter! Absolutely my favorite so far :) You did such a good job making all of the characters come together! And that LETTER! Dear god... so good.. so very very good! And Bakura said TRUST ME! TO ATEMU! ZOMG! So cute!! And of course Atemu listens, he's so freaking amazing.

I LOVED when Yami no Malik came out, that was really really good! He's totally amazing, you should write him more :) I love his evilness. He and Bakura would make an interesting couple xp!

This story is really so SAD though! Oh lord do I miss the AU's when they all have different bodies and can be with one another! ;_;!!

BUT REALLY SUCH A FREAKING GREAT CHAPTER! It was just... so touching! This part was the best, “Not letting you go.” Yugi tightened his hold." Omg... I just flailed my arms it was so cute!

Write more! Update soon!
YuugisGirl
2008-12-06 . chapter 11
NO! But...huh...why..no...how...but he...and they...and then..but..WHY?! I'm so confused! *pulls at hair* Ryou would really do that for Yugi and Bakura? And what about Yami? This whole story is ripping me apart and I love it! I can't believe the next chapter's the last one! *sobs* This story is the bane and yet the elixer of my life! Please for the love of every thing good and pure in this world UPDATE SOON! I. MUST. KNOW. MORE!
Night Rain Illusion
2008-12-06 . chapter 11
*wipes a tear away* I'm so happy that things are finally working out for everybody! And...daww...I can't help but cry that it's coming to an end! I almost hope you don't update as soon as you can...
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