FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination
| FanFiction.Net - unleash your imagination |
|
| Home Just In Communities Forums Beta Readers Dictionary Search | Login Register Extras |
| 2693 2008-07-16 ch 16,  | abuseSweet. Love that Moody remembers! Now Harry will have some warning. Also like that he's allowing a relationship to build with Sirius and Remus. Dumbles even if he managed to get emancipation overturned would also have to fight Sirius being his godfather. That would raise a stink! Then Harry could reveal to all how Dumbledore was responsible for killing the Flamels. Which I never really believed by the way. I mean why Perenelle would give him the real stone. Seems more likely a fake stone and they had to disappear for awhile. Even back in time so they could gather more elixer. Def ways around stone being destroyed. |
| Lexie Lupin 2008-07-15 ch 16, | abuseVery interesting story. It's kept me very intersted throughout the entire story so far, and for me, it's been hard to find a good intersting story like this lately. I'm thinking that it should be very intersting having Harry learn to become an animagus and I look forward to seeing what he might be. Wonderful story so far and I really hope you will update sometime soon. |
| Ulifan 2008-07-14 ch 16, | abuseGreat story |
| bookworm182 2008-07-07 ch 16, | abuseaw please continue. |
| P.R.M.A.S. 2008-07-01 ch 16, | abuseAwesomly cool story! I would offer to be a beta ( which I am in a way if you want me to ) but 1) I'm not a "qualified one" 2)You probably already have one 3) I have a 2 week vacation in August without internet access... 4) I can't really write ( but I CAN correct other's work ) So I'll just keep reading. You should have your beta go over previous chapters BTW. |
| yllom21 2008-06-30 ch 16, | abuseThis story is fascinating! I loved how you wrote Harry and his relationship with other charecters. The plot is like others, yet unique. I would like to see him do more with Alchemy than just a past reference. Good job so far, however! |
| Insane and Logical 2008-06-30 ch 16, | abuseamazing! |
| troy 2008-06-30 ch 16, anon. | abuseI await your owl/update email! |
| yllom21 2008-06-29 ch 13, | abuseGood story so far. I'll leave a proper review once I finish. |
| handadeath 2008-06-28 ch 16, | abuseHey! I enjoyed the story and liked the loophole you created for Moody. I can't wait for more and hope you update soon. Thanks, ~handadeath |
| The Silver Blossom 2008-06-26 ch 16, | abuseO... WOW!! COOL!! AMAZING! I really like it! I like Moody, and I don't REALLY like Dumbldore, and I always wanted a badass Harry, so this is PERFECT!! Dumbldore is more dumb than a door! Anyways, COOL!! I really like it! Keep updating! |
| Ton Tongue 2008-06-17 ch 16, anon. | abuseI am enjoying this story about an intelligent Harry Potter who won't be manipulated. However, I was sad at how much he held himself away from the Flamels. I'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters! |
| Kitsune no Kutsuu 2008-06-15 ch 16, | abuseyay you! this story rocks socks. i'll see you next update. >.< Vm have a dum-dum. i like them better than cookies. |
| Ryoku Dragon 2008-06-12 ch 16, | abuseHey. I've been meaning to leave a review for some time. So here it is. Good work. I like the really smart Harry angle, what i could have done without though is him being so tolerant of the know-it-all; she really ** me of. Anyway, keep up the good work and PLEASE UPDATE SOON! |
| FullMoony 2008-05-30 ch 16, anon. | abuseThe TRI-wizard tournament consists of THREE schools. not five. otherwise nice chapter. |