i lke the plot and it's cool that you gave them OC's to be with

once more, I'd say it's about time you got around to posting the chapter. :)

about time!

Aww..that sucks. I await your next chapter :D

ur story is so gd

ohh this story is very interesting two sets of twins Update Soon!

This sounds like it'll be interesting. :D Update soon! (Yes, thst'll probably appear in every review you recieve from me lol)

I can't wait for you to update this, mate! :] And I definitely want to see where the GeorgexSalazar comes in lol >.< Bad Lizzy... anyways update soon! ^-^

Oh I liked this! Please continue!
The idea is very original!

you need to allow anonymous reviews! I'm too lazy to log in half the time anyway! But glad to see you are posting your ideas. Also, check spelling before you post. If you want, send a copy to me and I'll proofread it for you before you post it.