You again..why am I not surprised?
This would have made a good story indeed.
But, since that is highly unlikely, it was also a very cute oneshot. I love the way you portray the two of them...like, when I read your stuff I definitely see Satoshi as the "man" of the relationship. But when I write it myself, I find it to invariably end up the other way around...well, sort of, anyway.

Anyway, I wrote a scene that will most likely end up in my own story, and I think I'll bother you with it. Expect a PM :]

I don't know how you managed to think of this pairing, but you definitely won me over. With only one fic. *goes of to read more*

OMG. This is amazing. I totally had this huge review written for you telling you how amazing this is and how much it would make me happy if you made this longer, but my internet connection died on me and it was all lost. Gomen nasai, but I am much to tired to rewrite it.

i really liked it

It's great...you really oughta continue it. It would make a good story...and before I forget to do it again, I'm gonna put you on my author alert.

I love you so much xD *cries* You dedicated this to me >.< *cries more* *drowns*
I'm dying in heaven... hm... I see Takeshi and Tosh getting it on xD Thankies for making this, you just made my month! Your writing style in this makes it seem like the reader is spying on them or something... It creates an erotic, forbidden feel... I LOVE IT! Next you should aim for a M story XD Hehehehe Make my year~ xD
Hearts,
Doreiku

I love your stories. I have almost all your stores. ESpecially US of Angel. Keep up the great work. THis one was funny. I think you could readly make it into a story. But its find as it is.

-makkhra

Woot!! And steph...gotta tell you, it's rated M ^^""
Not T, M...xD
Also, sorry I haven't been on lately, I had to draw like 11 pictures in the last 4 days for people on Gaia...>_>""
Today's my last day of freedom...TT_TT
And I don't think this story would be a good one if you made it long, it's already perfect as it is now! =3
I'll ttyl! =3
-Honey Muffins

Wow! I don't even really like this paring, but this story was great! I think that if you do write more you should up the rating though.

oh, that was love. as in, i loved it. very cleverly written and all that.

and i think you should turn this into a real story... even though you already have a bunch going on simultaneously... oh well! seeing an update from you just makes my day. ^_^

I never read a Takeshi and Satoshi fic before... Wow. I also don't get Risa and Satoshi. Risa's so annoying and self centered, and Satoshi's not...

This fic was so so good!>.< XD
Risa got served. ;D

Holy Cow! I LOVE the Satoshi Takeshi pairing! I am also interested in the little plot turning into a story! I really really like it!
Thank you!
Judi

Definitely interested, to answer your question. =D

This was great - I love your sex scenes; they're always so sensual and descriptive and very real. The emotions described in them are very... ah, well, realistic. XD It feels like they're real people.

Also, the little bit about forty-two seconds past when the security cameras are elsewhere, YES.

And the fifth-to-last and the last lines - YES. HOT DAMN, YES. =D ONCE AGAIN, YOU HAVE DONE IT.

The only part I didn't like was the line, "I was the dirty little secret, only this time I wouldn't report it." For some reason, that line just seemed... jerky, you know? I think it wasn't as good as your usual writing because it was so unpoetic.

Still - love, as always. I can't ever find any other SatoshixTakeshi fanfiction. ANYWHERE. SO THE RESPONSIBILITY FALLS UPON YOU TO PROVIDE THE SxT FANWORK TO THE WORLD!

...Well, yes. Keep it up.

You are a cruel, cruel person schizo...And I am so glad you don't understand the Sato/Risa pairing as well. That one scares me...

Anywho, I loved this fic. Completely and totally loved it. I would definitely be interested to see more, because this just pulls me right in. That and I'm curious to see where you would take this and how you'd handle it. And the Sato/Takeshi fandom shall grow with other authors. I just...have to get my butt in gear. ^_^' Adios!

wow, cool story. i really like it and it would be even better if it became a story or something, anway that's up to you.