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kingdomheartsproxi
2009-11-20 . chapter 12
omg i love everiting about the stori, ok maybe not the namine liking sora but hei, she still like's roxas more so i'm with you,
your story is great..a bit too detalied but a god one...
please make more, i'm curious to see wht's gona hapend
Bean-Sprout
2009-11-13 . chapter 12
So glad you updated! I cannot wait for the next chapter.. -waiting patiently-
LILMISSS
2009-10-29 . chapter 12
Yo! I've always wanted to read your stories (xXlil-eveXx recommended 'Too Far Over The Edge', which was really good) so I finally took the time to review!

I'm not too sure about this, but Deja Blue's gonna be published in a book? Because I really wanna buy it and tell all my friends "THIS BOOK WAS WRITTEN BY A AUTHOR SO STOP SAYING THAT I'M WEIRD FOR WRITING HERE!"

Uh, okay, anyway, the story's really cool. Awesome. Very thrilling. I actually thought over a few things that happened in your story, and unlike most stories, I really can't tell what's going to happen next, so it's good. Haven't seen any grammatical errors yet, so yay!

The most meaningful thing a person said to me...I guess it would be "You really mean alot to me", but I guess THAT'S outdated, since I sort of distanced away alot from the person who told me that. I was kinda touched. And my favourite quote...maybe "Friends are like bras; close to your heart and always there for support." Or maybe I have other favourite quotes, but I just can't seem to remember them. Hehe.

Anyways, do update soon!
lilcooper
2009-10-19 . chapter 12
do ya know wat? every good fanfic has not been completed yet! please please hurry and update with this one if i am to keep my sanity!
KurukiXV
2009-10-17 . chapter 12
So I've read everything you've got written today, and it's awesome. The plot flows wonderfully and all these one-sided pairings or pairings at all are quite entertaining to read. I'd like to know more about Roxas, how he died, and his life beforehand, but I know that part will come in due time. Great writing, and I can't wait to see the next chapter!
arianaXheatwave
2009-10-17 . chapter 12
ooh snap, this is awesome! i've been waiting for this chapter for forever!! i really like how things seem to be starting to come to a head. i can't wait until your next update!!
lilcooper
2009-10-16 . chapter 12
answer to ur question: if a bully tries to bully u, hit them in the balls/face and run. XD.
please write a new chapter soon! X
VanillaCookiesxD
2009-10-15 . chapter 10
*squeals with glee* That last line totally made my day :). I wish Roxas would show up some more though! There's so much to learn about him...and it's killin me to knw! D:
VanillaCookiesxD
2009-10-15 . chapter 8
Dun dun dun...oh my god. It sounds so suspenseful, but luckily I have a few more chapters to read :D. Great job!
VanillaCookiesxD
2009-10-15 . chapter 7
Another lovely chapter ^^. I seriously can't tell you how much I love this story. I really like Namine's character, and yes I sympathize with her up to this point. It was kind of shocking though...with her friends and stuff.
VanillaCookiesxD
2009-10-15 . chapter 6
I can't tell you how addicting this story is. It's so wonderful, heart-breaking, and a mix of emotions all at once! i like how you use metaphors to emphasize on feelings...it's makes the story more lively :D
VanillaCookiesxD
2009-10-15 . chapter 5
Wow. The way you portray her as a character is just so...deep. I can't even find the proper words to describe how well-written this chapter was, I mean I felt the character. I was able to empathize with her, and it's just so sad. I totally understand what she's struggling through. I totally didn't expect Riku to show up in the bathroom lol. But anyway great chapter :D
VanillaCookiesxD
2009-10-14 . chapter 3
Oh my god. This story is so wonderful! I absolutely love the idea! :D It's also very addicting. Hehe, Roxas is so mysterious :P
jenyflo5483
2009-09-28 . chapter 1
I love the first chapter already <3
KeytoDestiny
2009-09-27 . chapter 12
It's quite ironic, I decided that I wanted to re-read the whole story since I love it soo much, and then I thought I should ask you when the update would come after I finish. And just as I was about to start right from Chapter 1, the little ring of when I get a new mail says New Chapter: Deja Blue XD

I'm wondering more than ever as to what happened to Roxas, it's just killing me. It's been 12 chapters and I'm still hanging on the edge! And more than that, I wonder where the heck Roxas is when he's not with Namine, and how he sees Namine as. I'm sure Namine dearly wishes to talk to Roxas about everything, but for whatever reasons he doesn't seem to feel the same. *sigh*

Well, I was kind of sad that Roxas wasn't in the chapter, BUT at least we get to find out a little more about his past ^__^

For this question of the chapter, I have no direct answer to. I have never had anyone say anything to me that was a huge impact to my life or to myself. I have many quotes that mean something to me, but none that entirely connects or affects me in such a way that changes my overall feelings or view of the world.

And so many other questions are still not answered, such as who Namine's dear friend was, who Sora gives the bluebells to, and who Namine's cousin is... my guess was actually Kairi until I read the part that directly stated it was a boy. So my guess now is Seifer :3

Now before I overload this review box with too much meaningless chatter, I'll say THANK YOU THANK YOU THANK YOU and over and over again for updating Deja Blue. I was so anxious for the next chapter. And of course I'll always be until the story is finished XD

Please update as soon as you can! I love this story with all my heart 8)
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