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| Spitfire23 2007-12-21 ch 1, anon. | abusei read an earlier story and i thought it was so good that i looked this one up. This one is my favourite. Most fanfics i can enjoy the story line but the parts where they write about Sam or Jack's thoughts is where they usually loose me. But i think you hit the nail on the head. Congrats! |
| mara-anni 2007-09-10 ch 1, | abuseWow, I nearly cried...well done!! Insuffocable...they do try, but you're right they don't succeed - hence the fishing :) Great work, thanks for sharing!! |
| Anonymous 2007-09-05 ch 1, anon. | abuseSO worth a try! |
| Clara O'Neill 2007-09-04 ch 1, | abusenice |
| gategirly 2007-09-03 ch 1, | abuseI wish 1 review could show u exactly what reading this meant to me. Really. Well Im going to try bcoz thats all I can really do. I like ur stories bcoz they are deep and emotional and Im sure u have already read that thousands of times be4 and I wanted to know more words but I dont. Thank u for making me feel less lonely. Does it fit? I hope it does bcoz its true. Thank u xshippyangelx. Ur wise I dont know how old ur but ur wise. |
| CarterReplicator 2007-09-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseJeez!! You said in that email that I sent to you that you had an idea for a fanfiction in mind and I thought "Maybe I should get ready for shippyangel's next fanfiction" but gosh nothing could have prepared me to it. I'm..wow! One more time, shippy, you made my eyes get full of tears. This is so sensitive. Loved it, loved it!! |
| LuSo 2007-09-03 ch 1, | abuseIncredible Writing! I was hooked from beginning to end :) |
| Little Miss Delliham 2007-09-03 ch 1, | abusewow! i love Jonah and Thera fics and this one just about tops them all! i love the line; "Of secret jokes" absolutly brilliant! thankyou! |
| kinnik72 2007-09-03 ch 1, anon. | abusenice summary |
| 7 League Boots 2007-09-02 ch 1, | abuseSimple, beautiful in its spare prose; yet still descriptive enough to conjur vivid images. A potent and poetic capture of hidden emotions, desire, wishes. Thanks for sharing this. |
| gater62 2007-09-02 ch 1, | abuseThat was so good! The only thing I didn't think fit, was that Carter gave him an angry smile. I think it would be a sad smile. Very angsty piece! |
| dirtylittlegirl 2007-09-02 ch 1, anon. | abuseif you wrote a book i would buy it you know because wow you are an existencialist! and i love it! and you whats even better? ill watch bts again and what you wrote will fit perfectly again loved it xshippyangelx |