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| animelava 2008-08-12 ch 6,  | abuseupdate! update! update! update soon plz! |
| cross100 2008-03-25 ch 6, | abusei like it hope you will update |
| azaneti 2008-03-09 ch 6, | abuseWhat was it? I love this fic, please update soon! |
| Rokkis 2008-02-27 ch 6, | abuseUm.. 2 million... MILLION.. vampires! That's... quite a lot! Hehe, sorry just got hung up on that number of vamps! Sort of like this Harry, he's a no-nonsense sort of fellow and although rather cold and calculating he does do what seems to be the best for ME! Hope we'll soon get him in the company of some familiar faces!! Update again soon please!! Cheers! |
| MrPowell 2007-12-30 ch 6, | abuseodd... I'm not much of a dark!Harry kinda guy, but good story. |
| Concerned Abortive Reader 2007-12-21 ch 4, anon. | abuseThis is really bad...did you read it yourself? Awful. Try proof reading and picking less ridiculous plot points, and writing practice and reading good books. G'luck |
| starz4evr 2007-12-21 ch 6, | abuseRight-o!! Please updte soon! This is such a good fic! |
| Guardian Dimension 2007-12-17 ch 6, | abuseI like this! I do! :) |
| killroy777 2007-12-17 ch 6, | abusenice story updates plox? |
| kubas89 2007-12-16 ch 6, | abusegood |
| Ero-kun 2007-12-16 ch 6, | abuseStory is really good but I hope you will write longer chapters. I love your story ;> |
| Y-dO-u-CrY 2007-12-16 ch 6, | abuseWHAT DID HE SEE!? AH YOUR KILLING ME, anyways i lobeved it update really soon. |
| ReviewsGalore 2007-12-16 ch 6, | abuseStory: 5.25/10. I like the concept and on the surface it seems like a good way of combining the two book series', but the story seems to skip around a lot and has no real point other than Harry running around being bad ass. Characters: 3.75/10. Harry is quite OOC and, perhaps worse, entirely one dimensional. The other characters are not developed at all. Creativity: 9/10. The fic idea itself is a creative way of combining the two worlds and you have tons of interesting ideas in the fic. Writing: 7.25/10. Your writing is mostly correct, but your sentence structure in the first chapter needs a lot more varying. Believability: 5.25/10. There are lots of things in this that I don't find to be that consistent with either universe and the fact that you don't fully explain events, makes the whole fic feel a little unbelievable. Overall: 6/10. You have such interesting ideas and you are a decent writer, but your story doesn't flow and your characters need a lot more development. |
| Isles 2007-12-15 ch 6, | abuseGreat update, I look forward to future chapters. |
| Merrymow 2007-12-08 ch 5, | abuseI was wondering when you're going to update? |