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Insane Powerpuff Girl
2009-12-17 . chapter 17
I cannot stop laughing at the flashback to Quagmire being 2 minutes late to the dinner party. HILARIOUS! Definitely one of my favorite flashbacks in this story. Keep up the awesome work. ^_^
Ander Arias
2009-12-15 . chapter 18
This is really odd, but thanks to you, I'm starting to like brian and Stewie doing things together again. I guess that this is thier "unique chemistry" you talked about. Oh, and I loved Jillian's appearance! I hope she appears again.

Quagmire's code name was just priceless XDD
Ander Arias
2009-11-25 . chapter 17
Finally, I was able to read the whole story. If I took so many time is because sometimes is fast paced and interesting, while other times is slow pacing and I have the feeling that nothing happened. Kinda like LOST. Also when I read a FG story, I like to see humor or romance, and this story has neither.

Still, at least it seems that now the things are getting more interesting, since the heist is going to start soon.

Not as many Brian&Stewie as you said. I guess that you want to dosify. That's good.
Ander Arias
2009-11-25 . chapter 16
Like I said before, I like the parts with Lois the most. I also enjoy seeing Meg having soe screentime.
Ander Arias
2009-11-25 . chapter 14
Nothing much to say here. Like you said in the A/N, this is more an excuse to write about Brian and Stewie. You know, despite how much I loathe this pairing I really liked how did you used them
Ander Arias
2009-11-11 . chapter 13
Well, the action seems to be closer. With these last couple of chapters I'm starting to get into Cassie's characters.

By the way, I remembered that they used a pinch thing in Ocean's Eleven too. Maybe a reference? :)
Ander Arias
2009-11-11 . chapter 11
Don't know why, but the parts with Lois are actually my favourite ones. Loved Peter and Lois meeting again.
Ander Arias
2009-10-31 . chapter 10
Good to see more of Lois and her new life with the casino guy. It seems that their relationship has its flaws too.
Ander Arias
2009-10-31 . chapter 9
Okay, I think that it's about time to continue with this story. This chapter was by the way more interesting than the previous one. Wonder why they need a fake vault...unless it's for training.

By the way, I'm still confused about Cassandra. I'm not clear about she being part of the gang or not.
Ander Arias
2009-10-06 . chapter 7
So, the action starts now. This is getting more interesting.

By the way, in your author note, you said that cassandra fits really good in this story. Well, aside from being the plot device that set the whole story, I can't see how she fits so good as you say.

Anyway, good chapter. I'll keep reading.
Ander Arias
2009-09-29 . chapter 6
Well, it seems that this was a transition chapter. Let's see how this develops. I liked the subtle stupidity of Peter, too bad I can't said the same of the rest of the character, which seemed to have their personality almost erased, well, with the exception of brian and Stewie.

Once again, let me remark your wonderful writting style.
Ander Arias
2009-09-29 . chapter 5
Oh, God, now Herbert? Let's hope this story is good enough so his appearance can ruin it.

By the way, I'm really impressed of your writting skills, specially when it comes to description. One thing that was a little letdown for me was the serious undertone this story has (however, that doesn't play down its quality).
Ander Arias
2009-09-26 . chapter 4
Okay, this looks really good. You may know that I'm not very friendly of Stewie and Brian doing things together, even if they are not the main focus of the story (although sometimes depends of how this is handled), time will say if I can get through this or not. Oh, and don't worry if you are bad at writting Chris. Everybody is.

The only major complain I have as for now is the sudden introduction of several (maybe minor?) OCs. But otherwise than that, it's just fine.

Oh, and by the way, it was the Clooney/Pitt version in which I feel asleep. Dont't hate me for that :)

I'll continue reading tomorrow.
Ander Arias
2009-09-26 . chapter 3
Peter's plan looked really stupid(and so did Peter himself). So congratulations, you got Peter's essence just right.
Ander Arias
2009-09-26 . chapter 2
Nice start. Let's see if the rest of the story is as nice.
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