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| jcola0823 2008-05-12 ch 19,  | abuseAw first off this title fits perfectly! xD She finds out its axel, yay! I gfet confuzzled with all the Roman Numerals >.< Awesome job! *gives you a hug and some cookies* Keep up the good work! ~Sky |
| AngelJeanne 2008-05-03 ch 18, | abuseAww nice chappie! I still think its's Namine...otherwise...I have no idea..O.o The ending made me lol, Axel likes flames he just doesn't realize its THAT type of flames! I REALLY WANNA KNOW WHO IT IS! |
| jcola0823 2008-05-02 ch 17, | abuseEkk! I forgot somethings in my rewiew! I think it was Namine o.O I think xD and Twilight is the best book EVER! yay Edward ^^ *glomps Demy* ~Sky |
| jcola0823 2008-05-02 ch 18, | abuseAw, this was a really cute chapter x3 She gets her necklace back yay! *throws a snowball at Axel* Muhahaha! xD Awesome job on the chapter it was interesting and I can't wait to read more! Update soon and Good Luck! ~Sky |
| Blastbone 2008-05-02 ch 18, | abuseThis is really interesting. Keep the chapters comin'. |
| AngelJeanne 2008-03-28 ch 17, | abuseSee I'm reviewing! I think it's Namine and Roxas now...is it? TELL ME! |
| Tangerine342 2008-03-24 ch 17, | abuseHihi! Great story so far! The one part that kills me is the cliffhangers though lol. You keep asking for reviews and just so you know your reviews are set to non anonymous or W.E. it's called. If you go to your story options their should be something that says allow anonymous reviews. It basically means that lazy bums such as myself don't have to log on to review ur amazing work. I went to your deviant and I saw what Keyna looks like, she looks kinda like how I imagine Bella would. Lol! YAY KH! YAY TWILIGHT! YAY SUGARHIGHS! lol I'm out of my mind right now if you couldn't already tell. And now for the amazing foreshadowing guesses of DOOM! The one in gold is Namine, and the other is Roxas...we need akuroku fluff in this fic!...hm and whatever could improve this story?...hmm just longer chapters and more details where necessary. And Keyna CANNOT end up with Axel, cuz that would just be awkward...well if you have any questions just PM, and I can't wait for the next chapter. Till then ~Tangerine |
| AngelJeanne 2008-03-10 ch 16, | abuseI have no idea what the secret is but nice chappie! I don't like Xigbar being so mean though...but its your fic so no worries! Hope you update soon! |
| AngelJeanne 2008-03-10 ch 15, | abuseAww Demy is so nice! Is the person Kairi? Nice chappie though! |
| Singing Dancing Chef 2008-02-22 ch 15, | abusenice can't wait for the next chappie it is very funny 2. cant wait 4 an up date so UP-DATE VERY VERY VERY SOON DANCING FLAME'S WIND I'LL BE WATCHING U |
| AngelJeanne 2008-02-20 ch 14, | abuseCan't wait to see what happens next winkKeyna&Axelwink I wonder if you can read that! |
| AngelJeanne 2008-02-20 ch 13, | abuseme wonders why Axel fancies...er is defensive of Keyna...cough...lol so that the new superior name...DUN DUN! |
| Arora Borialis 2008-02-19 ch 14, | abuse...could you update soon please... i love it nuff said. im too lazy to write more. dang i just did. |
| Silentdeath Bringer 2008-02-19 ch 8, | abuseAWESOME and yes pocky is the bomb who doesn't love ah good pocky |
| serenity's angel 2008-02-18 ch 13, | abuseyour story is good. i love it! can't wait till the next chapter. |