While I think that Maria's advice was right (to focus on the present when she gets angry), I wonder about Emily's reaction to Maria. I have always seen Emily as a very proper, rigid, and extremely private woman. I have a hard time imagining that she would let herself talk to Maria so openly, even if she wanted to. Time will tell :-)

Hmm. Interesting. Well, first off, I'm glad Rory woke up. I do agree that love, faith, and hope can do a great deal. But I will also admit that while I think it's important to stay hopeful, science is still #1 for me. Hope that made sense, lol. Nice job.

The love scene between Luke and Lorelai was great- it was comfort, but deeper than that. Nicely done, I'm glad there wasn't too much detail (less is more, in my opinion).

Something from this chapter that hit me- the sound of the respirator being oddly soothing. How sad is that? Personally, I think that it's definitely something that helps you keep hope. Like Emily said- at least you know they're still alive.

Oh man. I knew that was coming but it still doesn't make it any easier to read. I actually had to flip to a different webpage for a minute about halfway through, it was just... ah! I think it's interesting that Lorelai is the one lamenting about Rory's future, and Emily is the one worried about Lorelai. Good characterization of Richard- the formal speech to the doctor was right on.

First off, I like the little tidbit about Luke's mother teaching him how to massage. Yes, Luke was a main character in the show, but we still didn't know that much about him. I think your characterization of Emily was very realistic- the "do you have anything to say to me?" and "Oh my god! The party!" were perfectly placed.

The guilt is starting already- a telling sign. I have the feeling Rory's legs are going to be amputated... :-(

I love the line "Well, that would depend on what you're dunking them into." Vodka and poptarts, there is a combo I've yet to try. And the cup on the dog's nose thing? Been there, done that. Just a few little inconsistencies I noticed: First, you said that Lorelai overslept, then that she was up all night. Was she lying to Rory, and I just misunderstood? Also, Lorelai gave Rory a big travel mug of coffee- but Rory later says "I should've grabbed coffee before I left." Like I said, maybe I just misunderstood those things. :-)

That line in there about studying as a solitary activity reminded me of one of my favorite Tristan/Rory moments "I view studying as a solitary activity." I love the image of Lorelai making up all kinds of crazy songs and skits to help Rory study as a kid- I actually do that with my kid, so it hit close to home. :-) This is a good start, I'm going to keep reading!

Yay! She's in there!
Very unique chapter, loved the memories that keep flooding back. It does give me hope that Rory will return.
Logan? Hm, long time no see!

Hye Lori, I'm back!
Why did I ever leave? This is so beautifully written. Lorelai was so excited! I love the scene in the diner where all the townies have their say on how to help her. Each of them were written so perfectly. Taylor, Patti, Lane, Zack. I loved Luke's grumpiness at the beginning, excellent!
Then, just like when someone is seriously ill, the mood changes and Lorelai needs Luke's support. He's right there for her. I love that he "asked" Maria how to help by mentioning that he doesn't know how to help Lorelai. That was wonderful.
The way you wrote the video scenes were phenomenal. I actually "saw" everything you wrote about the snowman and the skipping around the house. This was wonderful! Why did I stop?
Off I go to the next chapter...

oh man, School House Rock!! best stuff ever!! I went to youtube and watched my favorites! The interjections one is definitely my favorite!

good stuff so far. I have only read 1 chapter and I know there are 26 of them and the sequel! I've got a ways to go! well, I've got to get back to it. I probably won't review much. Sorry about that! maybe once at the end of the story since you've already finished anyway! gotta do homework and get to bed. I already stayed up way too late with memory lane watching old Boy Meets World episodes online! woot!

OMG! I can't write anything. I'm too busy crying! This is so heavy...

I love the Sookie and Michel banter! I hope you have some Richard and Emily in later chapters. You do a great job will all of characters so far, very well rounded.

As at tribute to the Grammar Rock reference, "...We barely had arrived, friends asked us to describe the people, places, and every last thing. So we unpacked our adjectives."

You really unpacked you adjectives!

Hi Lori,
Great start to a wonderful story! I love the connections you've made between the characters, so far. I'm so far behind and have so much for of your stuff to read! I guess that's a good thing! What a treat, what a treat so far!
Maria