Since Sora never got his body back after using the Keybalde darkness then Roxas should have all of Sora's memories. Does that mean he recognized Riku and was he still part of organization XI? also way to go with Kairi's characterization.

Interesting! So since it look like you're going to have Kairi looking for Sora, it makes me wonder who's goign to go with her and what weapon will you give her to defend her self.

Ok, so if the story isn't supposed to have any real pairings until the very end, why did you put it in with the Roxas/Kairi fic? I mean, aren't you allowed to have only one character when you go through that story creating proccess thing? Hmm...

Well, I think that was a pretty good chapter/intro. I, myself, have no idea what the letter's gonna say, but I'm really hoping you make a Roxas/Kairi pairing cos it's my absolute favourite pairing out of everything. And don't worry about the depressing stuff and all, I like depressing fics. They hold a more firmer grip on the reader instead of that sugary sweet happy junk people tend to write...well, it holds a firmer grip on me, anyway.

...I think I may be your first reviewer. You know, out of all the fics I've read, I've only been the first reviewer for ONE SINGLE FIC, so if I'm the first reviewer here, this'll be the second...oh, DUH, I'm such a genious! Give the girl a medal! ...I'm an idiot...

Well, even if I'm not the first reviewer, I'll still review when you update. This seems a bit too good to just leave and forget.

Update soon! O