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Reviews For: Dinner

alex's wonderland 2008-06-14 ch 1,	abuseThat was a really good oneshot! I love Darry stories, and you portray Two-Bit really well! Good work!
T.J.Grei 2007-09-05 ch 1,	abuseThat's cute, seeing two guys just talking and havin a ball
palpravda 2007-09-04 ch 1,	abuseNice. It's good to see a decent character study of these great characters. I won't say it's perfect. A couple of lines seemed just a bit out of character and/or not quite realistic. Overall, though, nicely done. Darry and Twobit are two great characters... two favorites of mine... and you managed to do them justice. Good work.
xodamhsoirxo 2007-09-03 ch 1,	abuseHey, I liked this a wicked lot, Bay. Really. You've got a knack for one-shots :P oh God Two-Bit with the bat...you're killing me Smalls. I love how you use actualy stuff in your stories, like shows and movies. Pony sounded like me trying to tell someone about a movie or something lol.
E.M. Nemesis 2007-09-03 ch 1,	abuseThat was quite original! I agree that Two-Bit and Darry are in need of more of their own "moments". It's probably true that they could have been close back in the day. I found myself amused at Two-Bit's dialogue. It seems so like him to sell his sister's doll at a pawn shop, or smell up the school with fish. Darry was also well written. He kept that air of a wise older brother, while at the same time was laid back in his reminiscing. Great work, you should be proud!
Girlz-Rule 2007-09-03 ch 1,	abusegreat one-shot:)