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Serena
2007-09-26 . chapter 1
Hey Love!

I can't be bothered signing in at the moment!

Hahaha! My guess was WAYY off!

But little Jenny as the culprt made the ending so lighthearted and made no one 'black-listed'.

I loved how you made Peyton older than the others - it was unexpected and completely different.

Oh, and since I can't be bothered sending you a PM on
AU = Alternate Universe
beta = someone who reads over your work, checks the spelling, adds their own input (ideas, ways to improve your story, etc)

I think that was all you asked me...

I just woke up! LOL! So feel special that the first thing I did was write you a review!

- Serena
haleyrox
2007-09-22 . chapter 5
damn! i was so close...i totally thought it would be peyton...anywhoo this was awesome! and u have awesome mystery writing abilities! lol.
Hales luvs Nate
2007-09-21 . chapter 5
lol! i loved that story!! Jenny was def someone i would never think of... i of course thought it was Keith... so fantastic work and break a leg for your future fics!! :-)
Nightlife Eyes
2007-09-21 . chapter 5
hm... i guess jenny is too young too understand the concept of blackmail so i'm not sure that would be affective in getting me what would now most likey be a pile of baby slobered cookie crumbs!
lol!
when peyton first came on the scene i was like woah!
an 8 year old driving. not sure if that's cool! totally safety hazzard!
lol!
and then i was all like mrs Jaglieski?
hm? and eight uyear old married... well why not i mean it is to jake!
yay!
go jake go jake go jake!
and then she was like my baby and then i was like WOAH MY GOD!
lol

it was an excellant story!

- Liza!
x-o-x
Naley
2007-09-21 . chapter 5
That was great!
I never expected little Jenny as the culprit.
Nightlife Eyes
2007-09-19 . chapter 4
wow!
this is so good! i love baley! it's my favourite! they're so cute!
yay!
but now on to the real question... who stole the cookies? i really want to know. and then i want to find them and see if i can blackmail them for 1!
lol!

great story update soon!

later!

- Liza!
x-o-x
Naley
2007-09-18 . chapter 4
Great chapter!
3.Hill
2007-09-18 . chapter 4
Thanks, Haley! This is SO cool! I finally have a character named after me! :D

loads of hugs, Laure
haleyrox
2007-09-07 . chapter 3
dude! it was totally peyton, or rachel! idk its your story, i cant wait to see wat u do next...
tripnfallbri
2007-09-07 . chapter 3
I say Keith! And this story is still as cute as ever!
tutorgirl0825
2007-09-07 . chapter 3
ooh! update soon! but my suspect is... KEITH!
the fourth drink instinct
2007-09-07 . chapter 3
dis story is cute!
little haley n brooke lol!
naley cousins? EW!
UD sn
Naley
2007-09-07 . chapter 3
Thanks for the update!
Haley and Brooke as little girls are so adorable.
Tim is one of a kind lol.
Naley23TrueLove
2007-09-07 . chapter 3
Hayley... I think Haley stole the cookies from the cookie jar!

LOL! I got confused typing that!

I mean, think about it... It's the perfect crime! Pretend you're the one looking for the suspect when you actually took them - you can put the blame on someone else and get away scotch free with a whole bunch of cookies! =P

I'll update in like 2 weeks... I have this assignment that's taking forever to finish... I officially hate 'social capitalism' =(
haleyrox
2007-09-03 . chapter 2
this is cute...update soon!
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