Not too bad Hayley ;) not too bad at all :P even though its OTH atleast its got a good setting and lines like "damn shes got good legs" speaks to lucas' character

You should definitely write more stories on here, because they make me giggle and happy! lol

I want to say I totally love your fanfiction. Please make another chapter. I have a account too and I cam across your page with the fan fiction and decided to read it. It is great! Write another one!

Hey, this is Laure (funfuzgirl) from I'm still waiting for new female character named Laure... lol

great chapter

AWESOME STORY AND CHAPTER SO FAR. I DO HOPE THAT NATHAN AND HALEY GET TOGETHER AND THAT SHE DOESNT LIKE LUCAS. LALEY IS JUST WEIRD ITS NALEY ALL THE WAY. KEEP UPDATING SOON!

Great start!

What a interesting story! Update soon pls...

HAYLEY! Love! AW! I can't believe I inspired people!

And LOL! you went ahead to calling Haley 'Hayley' but if it's easier for you... Then I guess it's goo enough!

I love how their 'college' is ressembling UNSW, with the O-Week (Orientation Week for the non-Aussies) and stuff [unless UoW has one that I don't know of... :S]

You have captured Brooke's essence in a bottle, by the way. BUT! I think you'd have to explain some stuff because Americans call 'uni' - 'college' So if you need some help... Googling American colleges helps or just ask me... And I'll ask one of my cousins :)

Well, I think that's all... My point is great start! Can't wait for the next chapter!

- Serena

cool, uds