interesting story, a few points to correct though, It is Marshal Anderson (not Kurumitsu)and he is Mihoshis grandfather not her great grandfather. Also Tenchis mothers name was Kiyone, her nik-name was Achika. I look forward to more on your other stories. Ja for now. (_)

Erm... Not a bad ending to this story but where did the Tenchi/Sasami stuff come from? I went back and reread (skimmed actually) the whole thing and didn't see a hint of it anywhere except for the one line near the end.

I do like how you are trying to use an unpopular pairing but I don't like how they got together. It's seems like Mihoshi is with Nobuyuki more out of pitty than love. You also need to watch all of the spelling errors.

First off, thanks for reviewing my Nobuyuki/Mihoshi stories. I hope you continue to develop this one, it has potential.

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I luv ur Mihoshi/Nobiyuki fics, they seem right for each other as you must realize since you write these...these are great fics, write more .

You dis me? Look in a mirror! It's interesting, but your writing lacks some color. It's still pretty good though. Read my fic, Things I'd Like To Forget please!

-LilWashuChan

I still think that Nobuyuki is a bit henti, but it makes for a great cover. This pairing is one that I like and have toyed with. There are several misspellings in the story that distract your eye while reading, but the basic plot is good and sheds a bit of light on one of the lesser known characters of the Masaki house.

That was a rilly interesting aspect that i hadn't thought about...This was good, write more!

Wow, Noboyuki and Mihoshi?...Hmm, interesting. Do go on!

Mihoshi & Noboyuki...what a clever and cute pairing! Well done...I only wished you had developed this idea even further! Always good to see fanfics dealing with Noboyuki in a serious fashion!