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pepperikeys 2007-11-13 . chapter 1
Aww I wish there we more to this story >.
hanyou-samurai 2007-09-26 . chapter 1
That was pretty good. Definitely NOT what I was expecting, but it was still good!
AvitarGirl 2007-09-23 . chapter 1
ROTFL!! ok then...i almost choked laughing. thanks a lot! that was just too silly! :)
Badly-Drawn-Boy 2007-09-04 . chapter 1
Okay...um, very intresting. Really.
notwritten 2007-09-03 . chapter 1
very interesting
Iria-Lonely 2007-09-03 . chapter 1
m duhh? what was all this about?

ok for originality...I have never seen this ... approach ...to the characters before.

ok,it is quite unlikely to me that a 15 year girl would have her first period at that age, then who cares?

furthermore...if jareth keeps track of impuber 'lil girls that makes him a pervert... argh disgusting thought... *you may reply: but jareth was flirting with her* and I say *he was patient and generous-in a weird way- and didn't try anything with her- now you have tainted that for me...
Sapphire4Steel 2007-09-03 . chapter 1
God, can I empathise with Sarah. You give a new meaning to the expression 'it hurts like hell' in the context of the Labyrinth.

Interesting little fic, haven't seen this done before so kudos for originaility!
Subtilior 2007-09-03 . chapter 1
*spit-take* thanks a -lot- ... you owe me a new keyboard! :) :)

gigglingly yours - S.
yodeladyhoo 2007-09-03 . chapter 1
Oh dear me ! That was priceless ! Thank you for sharing.
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