Thanks for that. :-) Enjoyed The Doctor, Martha and her mother in particular. Fergus seems like a totally different companion, and kudos for making him a bloke!

That was splendid! bravo! well done! You had me on the edge of my seat throughout the story...the doctor and martha were very much in character, and who would ever pass up the chance to read about a sick timelord? poor guy, it seems that everyone who writes about him has a preoccupation for making him throw up.
Fergus is by far the best, and very appropriate considering mr. Tennant's nationality. The accent was a little hard to read, and Martha's constant use of 'Mate' does wear on the nerves a little.
You are a skilled writer. More please...esp. Fergus!

There's nothing in the whole universe that is as cute as an ill doctor. He is wonderful when he's all needy and whiny, because he's so rarely like that, it's a super treat when he is.

I mean, OBVIOUSLY I don't want the poor old chap to get ill all the time, but it's wonderful when he does because he's not all high and mighty and all knowing, he's throwing up and drinking tea. It brings him down to human level, and he needs that, I think.

I like Fergus. He was absolutely brilliant. Love that Fergus had no idea who Rose was yet he knew all about Martha. That made me squee so much. Oh I want to just switch on my telly and find lots of Ten/Martha fluff that RTD has just decided to write and have filmed, edited and put onto telly in the space of a second. But no, we have to wait for halfway through next series before we see a lovely cute Ten/Martha reunion. BAH.

You've really inspired me to do some who-writing. This means you get a big thumbs up from me. =]

What a great start, sadly I don't have time to finish it at the moment, but I will later!

You write so well, and capture characters beautifully.

I was just wondering, at the end of 'sharpe's words' you said 'sharpe will march again in Sharpe's knee.' Was sharpe's knee ever finished, or is there anywhere I could find it, thanks

Fallen Eagle
(sorry for the awful punctuation of this review, trying to rush)

Well for three days this has been sitting in my in box and now I've read it. It's brillant, fantastic, superb! As usual of course. And I love Fergus. So sir may I have some more Fergus please. Loved the ending. Thakns

bloody brilliant! you HAVE to write a sequel!

Hehehe...LOVE this! Hope to see more from you soon! Keep up the great work.

Cute story! Nicely done! ^_^

"Blogging again" lol...loved that! ^_~

I found Fergus amusing. We definitely need more guy companions.

O, very nicely done. Good and exciting, and it's about time the Doctor had a male companion. Adding this to the Tin Dog.

Oh lovely ! This is so much fun...

Love that Ten's never mentioned Rose to Fergus, but talked about Martha a lot...

Love that she was slightly freaking over him not getting dressed yet because he was fiddling with his gadgets...

Love that Francine didn't want her microwave cannabalised - and that Francine's clearly got a soft spot for him now...