I loved your story.I loved how you used phrases and words from Pride and Prejudice. It is one of my absolute favorite novels. Great Job!!

I think this story is awesome!The writing is amazing and the plot is nice too.After I read the first two chapters I started talking like this.

It was a great story! I really enjoyed it!! Keep writing!!
I loved the personalities of Edward and Bella. Great characterization.

aw so sweet!

that was so well written! i love your vocabulary!!

This was such a beautiful story!

I am going to keep you on alert so I can find out when your novel is published.

I thoroughly enjoyed this story!

I see no affliction!!

Oh how precious!! A mouth hug!

oH! SHE GOT THE LETTER!

Oh Bella! To be so close to love and have it thieved away.

This was a wonderful chapter.

I'm glad Edward was able to defend himself to us readers.

I already knew by the way the family treated Elise and how Edward spoke to her; she did something heinous.

I hope Bella finds the letter!

Oh! The drama!

Poor Bella, but what she said is true.

We has experienced love, she hadn't and her one chance to experience it, she can't determine if it was true or not.

Poor Edward, I actually cried for him.

That was ingenious how you added the blurb from Elizabeth in Pride and Prejudice.

Oh that Duchess!!

Did I mention how much I love the dialouge..I could read this forever!!

It's so eloquent!

lol!

Beautiful...

I loved the whole bit about Elise losing her virtue to a stable boy...LOL

Damn! I was hoping Bella would be The lady of West Essex! LOL

I love the banter you've created!!

I really wish we still lived in those times, but of course with cars, electricity and INTERNET!! lol