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| Reviews for Whipped |
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   GDYRISAA 5/2/13 . chapter 2Out of the two chapters KonanxPein was my favorite, though I did love the phrase "a hiss only someone with a uterus could master" from the first chapter. The whole story was humorous and awesome. However, there were a couple of minor typos that I noticed. I guess I found them to be very prominent since the chapters are so short. "...many share that dream, just don't..." insert "they" before 'just'. "...you and your hand will be getting very reacquainted." the "very" isn't necessary and also doesn't make sense in context. Finally, I would just like to tell you that your closing line was just the greatest thing ever, and I laughed out loud, literally. |
| kazema 3/8/13 . chapter 2 funny :D and well-written. i love chapter 2 more than the previous. |
| Areej Binte Jawaid 1/16/13 . chapter 2 lol at the end. |
| Areej Binte Jawaid 1/16/13 . chapter 1 lol |
| deadweight5 9/1/12 . chapter 2 HAHAH Loved the Konan/Pein pairing! I love reading about them when it's not serious :P great job! You should do another Pein/Konan *heart* |
| Thetriple4ham 7/24/12 . chapter 2 Really? He'd give up his dignity just to get laid! Men and their stupid desire! |
| floating on clouds above 6/29/12 . chapter 1 Aww, this is adorable! :D |
| obsessed-with-music 6/22/12 . chapter 2 ...LMAO xDD |
| Shubhs 6/6/12 . chapter 2 -raises eyebrow- Nice. B) Ooh, write some more! NejiTen! Naruto X Hinata (that'd be so cute. -flail- ). Mikoto X Fugaku! 8D |
| Balenciaga 4/21/12 . chapter 2 :)) Seriously funny! |
| LilithiaRW 1/19/12 . chapter 2 Snicker. |
| CodeRed1682 11/30/11 . chapter 2 Holy shit! That was fucking awsome. |
| angelface714 9/30/11 . chapter 2 Lmbo lol these were funny... The power of women! Cha! |
| Snookster 8/8/11 . chapter 2 I Loved The Pain/Pein x Konan Part! |
| totaltheTERRIER 3/19/11 . chapter 2 "The tone she spoke in was the kind that married women used to say 'not only will you be sleeping on the couch tonight, but you and your hand will be getting very reacquainted'." I. Just. Died. Laughing. HILARIOUS story! |
